Crimson Clover.
As You Can See. I'm A Honey Bee. I'm Feasting Over...2 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Excellent poem using very colorful descriptive words. The photo adds to and supports your words to create beautiful presentation.
I noticed this:
clover gotta to have
(I think you should choose gotta or have to, but not both) :))
Best wishes!
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Excellent poem using very colorful descriptive words. The photo adds to and supports your words to create beautiful presentation.
I noticed this:
clover gotta to have
(I think you should choose gotta or have to, but not both) :))
Best wishes!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2023
Comment from JSD
Great little poem. Well done! I love 'Lily-white blush', but possibly only one l? Also, your first 'it's' should not have an apostrophe. But this is so simple and effective, conveying nature's simplicity perfectly. John
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Great little poem. Well done! I love 'Lily-white blush', but possibly only one l? Also, your first 'it's' should not have an apostrophe. But this is so simple and effective, conveying nature's simplicity perfectly. John
Comment Written 12-Jun-2023