Daymare
Nonet Poem11 total reviews
Comment from Regina Elliott
Hi Andrea, this is an imaginative and superb
Nonet entry. I don't know if
this an ongoing contest. If it
is this is a strong contender.
Best wishes for your writing.
Blessings ~
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023
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Hi Andrea, this is an imaginative and superb
Nonet entry. I don't know if
this an ongoing contest. If it
is this is a strong contender.
Best wishes for your writing.
Blessings ~
Comment Written 21-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
You captured me with the title. Daymare. That's clever, and tells me there is a mind a lot like mine, such as the one I am musing on today is U R 2 Mi
, see.
Unsure whether this meets the requirements of a nonet since some lines depend on a syllable from the previous line. Who cares. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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You captured me with the title. Daymare. That's clever, and tells me there is a mind a lot like mine, such as the one I am musing on today is U R 2 Mi
, see.
Unsure whether this meets the requirements of a nonet since some lines depend on a syllable from the previous line. Who cares. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your review and feedback.
Comment from JSD
Really effective use of this unusual form. I like this a lot. The journey you take the reader on is intriguing and it ends with a proper climax. It really turns on 'sweat-slickened' which reminds of 'sickened' and is a great phrase. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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Really effective use of this unusual form. I like this a lot. The journey you take the reader on is intriguing and it ends with a proper climax. It really turns on 'sweat-slickened' which reminds of 'sickened' and is a great phrase. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your review and feedback.
Comment from Wendy G
Yes this sounds like a daytime "nightmare" with all the emotions heightened and the body reactions. Detail is not given but the person has recurring horror of some past event. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Yes this sounds like a daytime "nightmare" with all the emotions heightened and the body reactions. Detail is not given but the person has recurring horror of some past event. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from royowen
I would usually associate nonets without a beginning on a previous like A in the first line, but hey it's still within the framework of the rules, but good luck and well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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I would usually associate nonets without a beginning on a previous like A in the first line, but hey it's still within the framework of the rules, but good luck and well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is a poem with very strict construction. You did it well. You invited us into the world of photography and speculation as to what this place once looked like. Nice pic to go with the challenging form
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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This is a poem with very strict construction. You did it well. You invited us into the world of photography and speculation as to what this place once looked like. Nice pic to go with the challenging form
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your review.
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You are most assuredly welcome.
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is a poem with very strict construction. You did it well. You invited us into the world of photography and speculation as to what this place once looked like. Nice pic to go with the challenging form
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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This is a poem with very strict construction. You did it well. You invited us into the world of photography and speculation as to what this place once looked like. Nice pic to go with the challenging form
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your review.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Good nonet poem. It's a very rare word, the 'daymare' word. I like the structure you created to make sure you follow the nonetheless count.
Good luck with the contest!!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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Good nonet poem. It's a very rare word, the 'daymare' word. I like the structure you created to make sure you follow the nonetheless count.
Good luck with the contest!!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your review and the feedback.
Comment from Lisasview
Good morning,
If I may make a suggestion so that your lovely poems reads more smoothly...
The capital letter might be better starting on the second line.
Lisa new to this site
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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Good morning,
If I may make a suggestion so that your lovely poems reads more smoothly...
The capital letter might be better starting on the second line.
Lisa new to this site
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your review and feedback.
Comment from Lisasview
Good morning,
If I may make a suggestion so that your lovely poems reads more smoothly...
The capital letter might be better starting on the second line.
Lisa new to this site
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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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Good morning,
If I may make a suggestion so that your lovely poems reads more smoothly...
The capital letter might be better starting on the second line.
Lisa new to this site
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your review and feedback.
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You are quite welcome