Spring Ballet
dance of the petals4 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Okay now you got s master piece here! This one is so good! Not only do you have an excellent 575 poem with excellent word choices, You also have an amazing picture to match it couldn't get any better than that. All that comes together and what a piece of magic you have! Well worthy of six stars!
Have the best of days!
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Okay now you got s master piece here! This one is so good! Not only do you have an excellent 575 poem with excellent word choices, You also have an amazing picture to match it couldn't get any better than that. All that comes together and what a piece of magic you have! Well worthy of six stars!
Have the best of days!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
Comment from Jay Squires
hey, Jer. Pink doesn't work against a white background. At least that shade of pink. Your poem itself is stunning and deserves to be read easily. Good luck with the contest. I think if you get the minutae taken care of, it should do quite well.
Jay
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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hey, Jer. Pink doesn't work against a white background. At least that shade of pink. Your poem itself is stunning and deserves to be read easily. Good luck with the contest. I think if you get the minutae taken care of, it should do quite well.
Jay
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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Hi Jay,
I knew it was wrong. Just hoping you weren't out there to catch it. Thanks for keeping me honest and in the pink.
Jer
Comment from Nicki Nance
An excellent 575 with so much movement - spinning, twirling, dancing. You graphic is perfect and your presentation in pink script calls up the feeling of spring.
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An excellent 575 with so much movement - spinning, twirling, dancing. You graphic is perfect and your presentation in pink script calls up the feeling of spring.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely descriptive 5-7-5 poem Lobber. I enjoyed the picture you created as pink petals, falling, twirling create a ballet performance. Loved the alliteration of
twirling in tepid waters
Enjoyed it. Cheers
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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A lovely descriptive 5-7-5 poem Lobber. I enjoyed the picture you created as pink petals, falling, twirling create a ballet performance. Loved the alliteration of
twirling in tepid waters
Enjoyed it. Cheers
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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thank you,
you saw an earlier pre-post release - hope the final version meets with your approval
- Lobber