Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your Senryu poem- nice picture presentation- poem tell an interesting story - watching from the shadows- would bring strong emotions in this case- interesting choice she made - Good job AP

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Again, with the OUCH!!!!!! This is a poem filled with pain. You do a wonderful job describing the pain. This poem hurts when I read it. You've again presented us with a beautiful package.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023

Thank you for the excellent five stars review and kind words, I really appreciate it.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That's so sad. I find it interesting that you chose the name Delilah, the woman who was the cause of Samson's downfall. Perhaps she could be this betraying ex-lover's downfall, too.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023

Yes I chose Delilah for that reason.

Thank you very much, big sister.

Love,

Marival ❤️

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Wow this is a sad write that brings a tear as this poor girl is in love with a man who is betraying her with someone else, you created some magic here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023

Thank you very much, Dolly, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

aw sad heartbreaking senryu suite
excellent imagery and cool pics
smooth flow with the title being before and after

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023

Thank you very much, Shelley, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful day.

Gypsy hugs