God and Jesus Christ
Contest Entry3 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and very true Nonet poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good and true words with amazing imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. teri
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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This is a very well written and very true Nonet poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good and true words with amazing imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. teri
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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Thank you!
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You are so welcome!!!
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You are so welcome!!!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A fine nonet with accurate syllable count and a biblical theme. The whole presentation is a striking one with image complementing your verse well. 3 things only: as there is such a limited word count I thought it was a shame that 'always' was repeated twice and I wondered why you put y'all at the end which doesn't really fit with the words above. What was wrong with 'you?' Additionally - as I have noticed this in other nonets - it might increase a sense of fluidity by keeping all the letters in lower case. But that's a personal issue. Just some thoughts..Good luck in the contest. Debbie
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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A fine nonet with accurate syllable count and a biblical theme. The whole presentation is a striking one with image complementing your verse well. 3 things only: as there is such a limited word count I thought it was a shame that 'always' was repeated twice and I wondered why you put y'all at the end which doesn't really fit with the words above. What was wrong with 'you?' Additionally - as I have noticed this in other nonets - it might increase a sense of fluidity by keeping all the letters in lower case. But that's a personal issue. Just some thoughts..Good luck in the contest. Debbie
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your help and kind review! I have fixed the poem.
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Yes, that's great! I think as you're keeping the capitals I'd put a capital on first letter of You? Good luck!
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It's done.
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That's great!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A faithful nonet for the contest and I enjoyed your sentiment and uplifting words here, your dedication to your faith is evident in every word, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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A faithful nonet for the contest and I enjoyed your sentiment and uplifting words here, your dedication to your faith is evident in every word, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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Thank you!
