Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Life - is a circle filled with opposites.
We would find pleasure hard to define if we don't experience pain.
Happiness is identified after sadness passes by.
Well done.

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 Comment Written 09-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023

Thanks Tom

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I do believe remaining centered is the key. Your wisdom shines through with this poem. It flows well and delivers a great message. Thank you for sharing it with us. I enjoyed reading.

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 Comment Written 09-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023

Thank you Ms Barbara, have a special weekend,.