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What Can a Man Do?

There's something about a woman ...

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Comment from C. Gale Burnett
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I could get myself in trouble saying too much, but I will say this was very entertaining and describes just how much our culture has changed over the years. I enjoyed your written flow of thought from beginning to end. Those last three paragraphs were a great wrap-up. I think there is a problem now-a-days in that young girls don't know any different because they look around and see the norm within today's society.
Excellent write!
Gale

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
    The problem came about by the allowance of salacious programming to take charge nightly, and the fashion industry of promoting what is worn. There are few outlets that sell modest clothing.
    Thaks for your comments.
reply by C. Gale Burnett on 11-Jun-2023
    And right you are!
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
    Gracias. Bonne journée. God speed.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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This young lady has either slipped her dripper or popped her zipper, and has a smile on her face that make me want to be the skipper in charge. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
    Thanks to the Slaic photographer whose name would not transfer being writ in Crylic.
Comment from BethShelby
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Skirts have gone up and down for years. By the early sixties they were up and hot pants were in. I believe it wasnt' the first time slyles were above the knees. I understand the roaring twenties bearly had them covering the bare essentials. But men always claim they grew up never seeing more than a bare ankle. Most of those covered packages you are going have the opporturnity to unwraps. Anyway when men come out with the cow joke, I've heard a few women who don't really want to marry, have their own comeback about not buying a pig.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
    It was
    All in fun and we all have agency to do as we please
    This was listed as humor, no?
Comment from royowen
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Don't worry I think every male on the planet,(with the excepted minority of course) would agree with you, it would rob us of that divinely appointed mystery that should belong to the male gender, the raging hormones of youth are gone,but not forgotten, beautifully written Tom, blessings Roy
Typo : Adolescan(t)hood

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
    Thank you
reply by royowen on 10-Jun-2023
    Welcome
Comment from Wendy G
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I agree totally. Many woman taunt by putting everything on show and then feeling "devalued" and "violated" when men react with their natural instincts. A wise man once said that men are aroused by sight, but women by touch. Women exercising their "freedom" to dress as they please in this way often brings consequences they don't want to accept, and they are not being fair to men. Well written.
Wendy

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
    You are wise beyond your age. 🌝
reply by Wendy G on 09-Jun-2023
    Well, that's pretty wise then!!! Lol.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Interesting comments . I have to agree with you, however some will say a woman has a right to dress the way you want. I remember classifying those dressing with class and those who dressed cheap. It is not so easy now. I see pictures of my 14 year old grand niece showing way to much.
Mary

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
    Thanks for your comment. I agree.
    Agency allows people to do as they feel but 'choosing the right' comes with positive consequences or blessings, let's say, whereas anything less might receive negative consequences. As Fram filters used to advertise: Pay me now or Pay me later.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
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Very nice storyline which is well written and well thought out as well as holding my attention throughout the piece!

Thanxxxxx for sharing and may God bless you and your family!

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
    Prego!
Comment from Lisasview
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I did enjoy your moment into the past... and, yes sadly the intrigue has all but disappeared.
But, life changes all the time and we must all move forward and along with it...
Lisa, new to this site

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
    Welcome. I appreciate your visiting and comment. I am ? never politically or socially correct but I find myself interesting. Sadly, my following is small considering the way to promote works is to pay which I do as earned never bought.
reply by Lisasview on 09-Jun-2023
    Yes, I am earning not buying as well,
    Lisa
Comment from Mario PIERRE
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Simply scandalous, as all thoughts coming from the erotism-filled head of Tom..LOL
What can I say to not ruin your great inspirational inkjet? You write with passion and ingenuity at the same time. You are a pure spirit. I love the part: think with the smaller of his 2 heads....
Extremely well written, Tom!!

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
    Mario, I thought myself to be one of a kind but you proved me wrong ? again. Your sense
    Of humor matches mine. Thanks.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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To some extent I agree with you when it comes to sexual attraction, I think women who dress well are those who are discrete and not those who put their entire wears on display. They are more likely to attract a good man, rather than a man who just wants sex. However, I also do believe that women should be able to dress just how they like without having to consider how men will look at them. After all men dress how they like without being threatened by a women looking.
A poignant write Tom, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
    Really? But 🤓 men don?t Have the prizes gals have. 😎
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 09-Jun-2023
    Of course this is from a male perspective Tom, from a woman?s perspective men have an abundance of prizes, he he he, love Dolly x