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Life Changing

Senryu Poem

3 total reviews 
Comment from JSD
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Love this. Probably unintentional but the assonance of a sort between fluttering, gut and future is really nice and off course the alliteration across fluttering and future. Great stuff.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2023

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    Thank you for your review and feedback.
Comment from Lisasview
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I do like this poem.. as it says it all...
Anticipation...nervousness
Hopefullness
Life goes on
Good luck in the contest
Lisa, new to this site

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
    Thank you for your review.
Comment from darkmoonbaby
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The emotions painted by this piece are obvious. Anyone who has received a job offer is likely able to relate. Wishing you all the best in the contest!

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
    Thank you for your review.