Missing My Muse
my muse is on vacation (5-7-5)40 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I understand. I haven't had this too often as I write something every day. I try to keep those juices flowing at all times. I keep a thoughts journal and many of my poems come from there. So glad to see this beautiful offering in short verse poetry. I'd say your muse has stirred.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Linda, and blessings in all things.
Sal xoxo's!
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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I understand. I haven't had this too often as I write something every day. I try to keep those juices flowing at all times. I keep a thoughts journal and many of my poems come from there. So glad to see this beautiful offering in short verse poetry. I'd say your muse has stirred.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Linda, and blessings in all things.
Sal xoxo's!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Hi Sally, I haven't written to much lately...
have had so much going on around me...
but I hope things slow down pretty soon...
Thank You my wonderful friend for a wonderful review...
God Bless...love much Linda xxoo 🙏💗🤗🌼😘
Comment from rama devi
Muses often take a long hiatus but return with verve. Hopefully, yours will too! The picture is a perfect complement to the poem, which flows well and has a nice touch of originality with the subtle personification of papers! Creative. Excellent consonance of W. I recommend a dash after line two for pause effect (optional suggestion).
May your muse return refreshed!
Warmly,
rd
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Muses often take a long hiatus but return with verve. Hopefully, yours will too! The picture is a perfect complement to the poem, which flows well and has a nice touch of originality with the subtle personification of papers! Creative. Excellent consonance of W. I recommend a dash after line two for pause effect (optional suggestion).
May your muse return refreshed!
Warmly,
rd
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Hi Rama Devi, Thank You my sweet friend for a wonderful review...
I'll go check on that dash...thank you...
I have just had to many things happening around me...and
it's hard to concentrate on writing...hopefully things will get better...and slow down...
I'm sure when my muse gets through vacationing in
Hawaii...he will find his way back...love you...
and God Bless...Linda xxoo 🙏😘🌼🤗
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Love you too, Linda dear. Have fun in Hawaii! Muses need vacations too!
Big hugs,
rd
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big hugs right back at you...love xxoo
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xxoo
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Linda, I think that your Muse must be hanging out with mine up on some stars. Your poem is well written, and this is a poem that many can/will relate to. Of special note:
tragically missing words
(good sensory appeal)
Well chosen photo. Suggestion: try entering the six-word contest. That's the best that I've been able to do in a while. Lol, but true.
Well done. Xo. Margaret
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Hi Linda, I think that your Muse must be hanging out with mine up on some stars. Your poem is well written, and this is a poem that many can/will relate to. Of special note:
tragically missing words
(good sensory appeal)
Well chosen photo. Suggestion: try entering the six-word contest. That's the best that I've been able to do in a while. Lol, but true.
Well done. Xo. Margaret
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Hi Margaret, I have had so many things
happening around me...I can't concentrate...
but I am hoping things will slow down soon...
Thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend...
it's so good to see you...love you...Linda xxoo 🙏🤗🌼💗
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, Linda.
-Hope you get back to writing soon.
-You have been missed.
-You wrote a very good poem about it.
-Very good description of the papers missing words.
-A good concluding line and question.
-You are making a start with this poem.
-Good wishes are being sent your way.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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-Nice image and presentation, Linda.
-Hope you get back to writing soon.
-You have been missed.
-You wrote a very good poem about it.
-Very good description of the papers missing words.
-A good concluding line and question.
-You are making a start with this poem.
-Good wishes are being sent your way.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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Hi Pam, I think my muse went to Hawaii...like it so much...
and stayed...
but truly...I just have so much going on around me...
it's hard to concentrate on my writing...I hope things
slow down soon...
Thank You for a wonderful review my sweet friend...
God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo 🙏🌼🤗💖
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Hawaii is a nice place not that I've ever been there! I hope things slow down for you, too. You are very welcome for the review, Linda🦢🦋🦉🌸🌺
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smiling big...love xxoo
Comment from Paul McFarland
My muse has also been missing. I wouldn't be surprised if those two ran off together. I have never been able to tell if my muse is male or female. Do you know the gender of your muse?
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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My muse has also been missing. I wouldn't be surprised if those two ran off together. I have never been able to tell if my muse is male or female. Do you know the gender of your muse?
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Hi Paul, has too be a male...he left without
without reason...betrayed me...toyed with my heart...
woe-is-me...
I think mine went to Hawaii...liked it so much...and stayed...
but truly I've just had so many things happening around me...
I can't concentrate...I hope things to slow down soon...
Thank You for a wonderful review my sweet friend...
God Bless...love Linda xxoo 🌼😄💖
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Yeah, I get this 5-7-5 totally. To think the muse goes on vacation without inviting one along. I enjoyed reading this relatable short piece. Nicely done. On a side note, the girl in picture might benefit from a desk to write on.. lol ;-)
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Yeah, I get this 5-7-5 totally. To think the muse goes on vacation without inviting one along. I enjoyed reading this relatable short piece. Nicely done. On a side note, the girl in picture might benefit from a desk to write on.. lol ;-)
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Hi Diana, what good is a deck...if your
unable to write on it???...LOL
I know a lot of people on here who have
this same problem...
I've just had so much happening to me...
it's hard to concentrate...I'm sure in
time my muse will get tired of Hawaii...
and come back to writing...
Thank you for a wonderful review sweet girl...
love Linda xxoo
Comment from royowen
Somebody asked me what is my poem, my reply, I haven't written it yet, and that is what you have in your arsenal of words dear Linda, beautifully written my dear friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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Somebody asked me what is my poem, my reply, I haven't written it yet, and that is what you have in your arsenal of words dear Linda, beautifully written my dear friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
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Hi Roy, I think my muse went on
vacation to Hawaii...liked it so much and stayed...
but truly my sweet friend...I just have so much
going on around me now...I can't concentrate on my
writing...I hope things will slow down soon...
Thank You so much for a wonderful review you...
God Bless...love Linda xxoo 🙏🙏🌼🤗
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You?ll see your way through dear girl.
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Thank You Roy...love xxoo
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My privilege
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Finding time to concentrate on writing is difficult when you lead a busy life Linda and you came up with some inventive words here, so your muse is still working for you, mush enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Finding time to concentrate on writing is difficult when you lead a busy life Linda and you came up with some inventive words here, so your muse is still working for you, mush enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Hi Dolly, Thank You for a wonderful review
my sweet friend...
I have had so much happening around me...I
can't concentrate...I'm sure in time things will slow down...
God Bless sweet girl...love much...Linda xxoo 🙏🤗🌼💖
Comment from lyenochka
I hope you get inspired to write. You have had such an interesting life and you survived so much. I hope you share about all the different jobs you had and your favorite coworkers over the years.
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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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I hope you get inspired to write. You have had such an interesting life and you survived so much. I hope you share about all the different jobs you had and your favorite coworkers over the years.
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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Hi Helen, Thank you so much my caring friend
for your encouraging words...and your wonderful review...
love much you...Linda xxoo
did you get my PM...and how is the moving going?..
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
It'll be back! Well actually it came back with this 5-7-5 verse which is so well complemented by the image. Very relatable sentiments neatly contained in so few words. Well Done! Debbie
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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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It'll be back! Well actually it came back with this 5-7-5 verse which is so well complemented by the image. Very relatable sentiments neatly contained in so few words. Well Done! Debbie
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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Hi Debbie, Thank You so much for your kind words...and a wonderful review...love you...Linda xxoo
