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Comment from barbara.wilkey
the stars in your eyes
illuminate our path home (These two lines are perfect. I didn't think you could possibly do any better and then you add...)
where I'll bask
in the moonlight of your love (It doesn't get any better. Thank you.)
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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the stars in your eyes
illuminate our path home (These two lines are perfect. I didn't think you could possibly do any better and then you add...)
where I'll bask
in the moonlight of your love (It doesn't get any better. Thank you.)
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your kind review and positive feedback. Have a great day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
i like the imagery of the stars in her eyes lighting the way home - brings a nice picture to the mind
great poem - thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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i like the imagery of the stars in her eyes lighting the way home - brings a nice picture to the mind
great poem - thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 07-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Thank you, Shelley. :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Another sweet love poem with the passion growing from the twinkling stars in the beloved's eyes to the good of moonlight in the love shared between the two.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Another sweet love poem with the passion growing from the twinkling stars in the beloved's eyes to the good of moonlight in the love shared between the two.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Thank you, big sister. 😘
Love,
Marival ❤️