Lessons Learned and Spiritual
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Abandoned ~Abortion~Abused"Do good and feel good poems
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Comment from Anne Johnston
Thank you, Debi, for sharing this sad but true story. How sad that this happened to your friend. I admire you for stepping out and writing this in her memory.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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Thank you, Debi, for sharing this sad but true story. How sad that this happened to your friend. I admire you for stepping out and writing this in her memory.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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I did this one already so not sure why it is showing twice.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh dear God, Debi, how very tragic! I am so sorry for your loss.
I write once a year for someone too, but not about abuse -- about addiction.
This was so moving, and beautifully done!
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Oh dear God, Debi, how very tragic! I am so sorry for your loss.
I write once a year for someone too, but not about abuse -- about addiction.
This was so moving, and beautifully done!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Hi Dawn, you can't possibly know how much your compassionate comments meant to me. Thank you and I really appreciate the honor of your six stars and your kindness, my friend!
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xxoo Me too, Debi. Likewise.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this with us. Abuse is horrible, I know, my first husband was abusive, and I was able to get away. Not everybody is. As for abortion. I am very much against it. To be a women gave up her bodily rights when she chose to have unprotected sex. Now, there's another life involved.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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Thank you for sharing this with us. Abuse is horrible, I know, my first husband was abusive, and I was able to get away. Not everybody is. As for abortion. I am very much against it. To be a women gave up her bodily rights when she chose to have unprotected sex. Now, there's another life involved.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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Hi Barb, I am right there with you when it comes to abortion. No matter what. Life is special even if it is a rape. You can always adopt it out. But in this case Paula (that is her real name, but used Jane as in Jane doe, so if her kids saw this they wouldn't know if was her I write about.. Anyway you can't possibly know how much your compassionate comments mean to me. Thank you and I really appreciate your kindness, my friend!F
Comment from Goodadvicechan
It is an excellent picture fir this poem
Your poem is well written.
It is a sad story for both the mother and the baby.
How can people be so cruel?
Where is their conscience?
Aren't they ashamed of themselves abusing others?
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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It is an excellent picture fir this poem
Your poem is well written.
It is a sad story for both the mother and the baby.
How can people be so cruel?
Where is their conscience?
Aren't they ashamed of themselves abusing others?
Comment Written 07-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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Hey there my friend, Chan. You can't possibly know how much your compassionate comments mean to me. Thank you and I really appreciate your kindness, my friend!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a tragic story of Jane's married life,
Debi. You did an awesome job sharing it
with the hope it will help others before it's too
late for them. My sincere condolences on
the loss of your beloved friend. Your words
were straight from you heart, they were descriptive,
and meaningful. The rhymes worked well, and
the flow was perfect. The picture was a great addition.
I liked the color scheme, too. You are to be commended
for your thoughtfulness in continuing to share her
story and for the love you gave her and continue to
show.
Thank you for sharing and caring, Jan
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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What a tragic story of Jane's married life,
Debi. You did an awesome job sharing it
with the hope it will help others before it's too
late for them. My sincere condolences on
the loss of your beloved friend. Your words
were straight from you heart, they were descriptive,
and meaningful. The rhymes worked well, and
the flow was perfect. The picture was a great addition.
I liked the color scheme, too. You are to be commended
for your thoughtfulness in continuing to share her
story and for the love you gave her and continue to
show.
Thank you for sharing and caring, Jan
Comment Written 07-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Hi Jan, you can't possibly know how much your compassionate comments meant to me. Thank you and I really appreciate the honor of your six stars and your kindness, my friend!
Comment from Spitfire
I remember the one you wrote last year in her memory. Your ability to find the perfect end rhymes in groups of four is amazing. The line that really got to me?
You kept our baby from its cry.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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I remember the one you wrote last year in her memory. Your ability to find the perfect end rhymes in groups of four is amazing. The line that really got to me?
You kept our baby from its cry.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Hi Shari, how kind that you'd remember last yrs poem. I appreciate your kind and compassionate comments for my poem for my friends abusive marriage. This meant a lot to her to not let her death be in vain. Thanks again my dear friend!
Comment from nomi338
There are so many murderers who appear to get away with it. Fear not, our God is a god of justice. He loves children and he hates murderers. The thing that guarantees their eventual punishment. They are so sure of their escape from punishment, they will never seek God's forgiveness. This evil man you mentioned will no doubt ever feel the need to be forgiven.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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There are so many murderers who appear to get away with it. Fear not, our God is a god of justice. He loves children and he hates murderers. The thing that guarantees their eventual punishment. They are so sure of their escape from punishment, they will never seek God's forgiveness. This evil man you mentioned will no doubt ever feel the need to be forgiven.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Awe Nomi, You are always so caring and sweet when it comes to caring about feelings. you can't possibly know how much your compassionate comments meant to me. Thank you and I really appreciate the honor of your six stars and your kindness, my friend!
Comment from Brooke Alice MacKenzie
Oh my goodness. This is powerful, moving, so well-written, and such a deep tribute to your friend. I think I read this three or four times. I absolutely loved it. Thank you for sharing her story and creating this amazing poem.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Oh my goodness. This is powerful, moving, so well-written, and such a deep tribute to your friend. I think I read this three or four times. I absolutely loved it. Thank you for sharing her story and creating this amazing poem.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Hi Brooke, you can't possibly know how much your compassionate comments meant to me. Thank you and I really appreciate the honor of your six stars and your kindness, my friend!
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Obsessed with this poem. I have already sent it to several of my friends (along with its context). You are truly talented!!!! Please, please, please keep writing!!!!!
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Brooke, you are so sweet. Thank you so much!
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
Oh, Debi, it's things like this poem here, that set you apart and make you such an exceptional human being. I am moved beyond words. Your kindness in honoring your friend is inspiring, and your stunning poem is carried out so beautifully. You've made her very proud, no doubt. Sending you all my love.
xoxo
Jess
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Oh, Debi, it's things like this poem here, that set you apart and make you such an exceptional human being. I am moved beyond words. Your kindness in honoring your friend is inspiring, and your stunning poem is carried out so beautifully. You've made her very proud, no doubt. Sending you all my love.
xoxo
Jess
Comment Written 07-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Hi there my sweet Jess, you can't possibly know how much your compassionate comments meant to me. Thank you and I really appreciate the honor of your six stars and your kindness, my friend!
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for honoring your friend this way. Yes, please write every year about all that she went through. It's important to know about the loss of life and how women living in abusive relationships should get out to save themselves and their babies.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Thank you for honoring your friend this way. Yes, please write every year about all that she went through. It's important to know about the loss of life and how women living in abusive relationships should get out to save themselves and their babies.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Hi Helen, I appreciate your kind and compassionate comments for my poem for my friends abusive marriage. This meant a lot to her to not let her death be in vain. Thanks again my dear friend!
