The Tornado
It caused havoc.3 total reviews
Comment from Andrea Kepple
An interesting story based in the middle of a tornado outbreak. I would have liked more information, more details when it comes to things like the car accident and what Stacie was doing in the house when she realized the speed off the winds. I think 100 mph winds are enough to start ripping siding off of houses and possible enough to start lifting the roof. I can't even imagine how terrifying 180 mph winds would be.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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An interesting story based in the middle of a tornado outbreak. I would have liked more information, more details when it comes to things like the car accident and what Stacie was doing in the house when she realized the speed off the winds. I think 100 mph winds are enough to start ripping siding off of houses and possible enough to start lifting the roof. I can't even imagine how terrifying 180 mph winds would be.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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Thanks!
Comment from nor84
I have one recommendation: you should take the word "shut" out of that 1st sentence because you have added to the required sentence, which is The door slammed, echoing down the long hall. The rules say you cannot add to the sentence. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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I have one recommendation: you should take the word "shut" out of that 1st sentence because you have added to the required sentence, which is The door slammed, echoing down the long hall. The rules say you cannot add to the sentence. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Thanks!
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent for the
The Door Slammed writing prompt entry. Good luck!
The story was very well written and well thought out! It held my attention throughout the entire story!
Thank you and may God bless you and your family!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Excellent for the
The Door Slammed writing prompt entry. Good luck!
The story was very well written and well thought out! It held my attention throughout the entire story!
Thank you and may God bless you and your family!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Thanks, will you please read the 575 entries?
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;-) I will try my best!
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Ok!
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Please read them, vote for favorite entry.
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Please read them, vote for favorite entry.
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Did you read them yet?
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I have a full schedule that leaves me little time for reading a lot. I will if I can.
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If I can I will
