Learning To Fly
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Not Staying In"Personal Restoration Project
13 total reviews
Comment from Heather Knight
I had missed this one and I love it. You have the ability to turn anything into rhyme and your notes are hilarious.
I love the photo, BTW.
You should write a poem about sloths next.
Thanks for making me smile. You're a great poet.x
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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I had missed this one and I love it. You have the ability to turn anything into rhyme and your notes are hilarious.
I love the photo, BTW.
You should write a poem about sloths next.
Thanks for making me smile. You're a great poet.x
Comment Written 22-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2023
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Hi Maria :)
Thanks so much for the review!
Just popped on site briefly... hope to spend some proper time here over the summer!
Best wishes as always, Debra x
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You'll soon have a lot more time. x
Comment from Sally Law
You two are so adorable and athletic! I don't blame you and seize the day while it's beautiful. Keeping you close to me, Ms. Sunshine. A lovely Whitney once again. Sending you my best today as always, dear Debra.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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You two are so adorable and athletic! I don't blame you and seize the day while it's beautiful. Keeping you close to me, Ms. Sunshine. A lovely Whitney once again. Sending you my best today as always, dear Debra.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 15-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much, Sal :) xx
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I totally agree - leave those teenagers at home. Their loss. And this day was your gain. Not only beautiful time in the sunshine, good lunch, and ice cream treat, but your wrote a very sweet poem about your adventure.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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I totally agree - leave those teenagers at home. Their loss. And this day was your gain. Not only beautiful time in the sunshine, good lunch, and ice cream treat, but your wrote a very sweet poem about your adventure.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Hi Ginda :)
Thank you for your kind feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from patcelaw
I often feel that way when I have a day when it's just too nice to stay inside. I am having a little trouble sleeping tonight, so I am in the middle of the night reviewing this work. Patricia
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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I often feel that way when I have a day when it's just too nice to stay inside. I am having a little trouble sleeping tonight, so I am in the middle of the night reviewing this work. Patricia
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Hi Patricia :)
Thank you for your kind feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Making the most of a sunny day here Debra and it sounds like you had fun on the bikes and topped it all off with an ice-cream too, a joy to read, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Making the most of a sunny day here Debra and it sounds like you had fun on the bikes and topped it all off with an ice-cream too, a joy to read, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 05-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Hi Dolly :)
Thank you for your kind feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are uplifting, descriptive and creative. The read of this poem left me with a feeling of a way to enjoy your day no matter what else is going on in your life. The scene the author expressed was filled with a good time, fun and enjoyment. The artwork is awesome! Great Poem!
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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The author's words are uplifting, descriptive and creative. The read of this poem left me with a feeling of a way to enjoy your day no matter what else is going on in your life. The scene the author expressed was filled with a good time, fun and enjoyment. The artwork is awesome! Great Poem!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Hi :)
Thank you for your kind feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice photo and presentation, Debra.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good description of the nice day
and riding your bikes.
-Lunch and ice cream was a plus for the day!!
-Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2023
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-Very nice photo and presentation, Debra.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good description of the nice day
and riding your bikes.
-Lunch and ice cream was a plus for the day!!
-Well done.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2023
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Hello Pam :)
Thank you so much for your kind feedback.
I appreciate your time and your comments as always and I hope to be back soon. For now, work demands my attention!
Take care
Best wishes, Debra
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You are very welcome, Debra. Hope your work eases up and I will look forward to whatever you post. Take care and have a good day and rest of your week.
Comment from lyenochka
That's you? I thought it was one of your daughters! You're so young looking! And I'm so glad you went on a date with your hubby and got some healing dose of fresh air and vitamin D! The kids will go out when they want to and hopefully get some energy from exercise later...
Enjoyed your brief poem!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2023
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That's you? I thought it was one of your daughters! You're so young looking! And I'm so glad you went on a date with your hubby and got some healing dose of fresh air and vitamin D! The kids will go out when they want to and hopefully get some energy from exercise later...
Enjoyed your brief poem!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2023
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Hello Helen :)
Yeah, that's me! You're too kind lol
Thank you so much for your kind feedback.
I appreciate your time and your comments as always and I hope to be back soon. For now, work demands my attention!
Take care
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I think I must get to know more of these verse forms - you're such a good ad for them. Do they have to rhyme? Your day sounds wonderful and, no doubt, a great escape! And the ice-cream very well deserved! Thanks for sharing, Debra. Another week already - speak soon. Dx
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2023
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I think I must get to know more of these verse forms - you're such a good ad for them. Do they have to rhyme? Your day sounds wonderful and, no doubt, a great escape! And the ice-cream very well deserved! Thanks for sharing, Debra. Another week already - speak soon. Dx
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2023
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Hello Debbie :)
Thank you so much for your kind feedback.
I appreciate your time and your comments as always and I hope to be back soon. For now, work demands my attention!
Take care
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You sound to have had a lovely time (especially the ice-cream reward for all those calories you were burning). I'm sure I should know both the places you mentioned, but I can't quite bring them to mind offhand. shame on me! kay
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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You sound to have had a lovely time (especially the ice-cream reward for all those calories you were burning). I'm sure I should know both the places you mentioned, but I can't quite bring them to mind offhand. shame on me! kay
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Hi Kay :)
Thank you for your kind feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra
