Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Boy, can you write a story or what? The story or saga is completely engaging. You never slow down on the action. It just keeps building. Grand writing. Great pictures. No Need To Reply Karen

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2023

Comment from Melodie Michelle

Excellent

Excellent story and the characters interacted perfectly throughout the piece! It is a well thought out story and well written as well!

Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family!

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023

Thank you, Melodie :) So thrilled you enjoyed the chapter. Your positive feedback made my day! I appreciate it!

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by Melodie Michelle on 06-Jun-2023

;-)

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Wow! The first part was extremely exciting and edge of the seat writing.

Couple of minor things:

Then finally, Jace spoke. "Let me know as
(Spoke is a speech tag in this structure so :
Jace spoke, "Let )

Also:

a look of a man with the intent to kill, "I'm going to rip him into tiny pieces."
(to kill.)

Great writing!
D

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023

Thanks so much, Douglas :) I appreciate your positive feedback and helpful advice. I will definitely make the changes. Great eye! :)

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

This piece held my interest the entire time. Even though I just met them, I feel for the characters already. I sit on the edge of my chair, hoping someone will get to Tessa before it is too late.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023

Thank you, Mia :) I am so thrilled you enjoyed the chapter. Your positive feedback made my day! Hope to hear from you again! More Breedline adventures coming soon.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

The horror of having one's blood sucked from one wouldn't be peasant to say the least as is happening to Tessa, wouldn't be pleasant at all, as is Eve's need, of course we know that Sebastian and Eve both turn, as Eve will become tired of what she is. Of course we know Tessa will take her place with the others. This is beautifully written dear Shana, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023

Thank you, dear friend :) I sure appreciate your feedback, and your support. You know the story already, but you still continue to follow it. That means a great deal to me.
I will say it has been hard to go back and rewrite Sebastian and Eve in their evil ways. But eventually, when the story is finished, this book will be better than the first edition. It will give me peace and confidence that I did my best.

Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 04-Jun-2023

It?s better already dear girl.