Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi,
This is a nicely written free verse with strong imagery and some good alliteration and consonance. It shows why we should be more thankful for the beauty of nature.
Good luck
H
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023

Thank you kindly Joan :-)

reply by dragonpoet on 25-Jun-2023

You are most kindly welcome, Susan.
Joan

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Beautifully penned and illustrated haibun, one of my favorite forms of poetry. The summer theme is always pleasing, and in buttercup yellow! Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the summer poetry contest.
Sally :))

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023

Hello Sally! Thank you so much! :-)

Comment from Lisasview

Good

I so enjoyed the read...As I am new on Fan Story this is my first read of yours.
I love it when a poet includes nature in his poem.
And, I am delighted to read the information on Haibun poetry.
Such wonderful ~ interesting information.
Lisa, now in Spain

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023

Thank you Lisa 😊

reply by Lisasview on 05-Jun-2023

You are most welcome. I am excited to find out more about the form you used, Haibun...
Thank you for sharing that with all of us...
Lisa