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Comment from kahpot
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I loved this poem and read it a few times, so very full of emotion as your words kept guiding me towards (vampires) I know we get different feels for poetry, but this one took me there, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
    hahaha...... there are some really sexy vampires :) lol
    Thank you very much, Kym. May you have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----one about emotions I vagually remember though the mists of long ago; captures the almost-desperation of desiring someone quite nicely, thank you!

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
    Thank you very much, Mike, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This poem is deeply passionate, sensual, and full of hope as love would continue even if parted. Thank you for sharing this complete package with us. I enjoyed reading.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
    Thank you, Barbara, that means a lot coming from you.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Melodie Michelle
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Excellent poem and it flowed nicely throughout the piece which was very well written indeed!

Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you and your family!

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a deeply passionate and sensual free-write full of desires of the flesh and deep connections. I enjoyed the urgency of love here and the romance, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review , and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Heather Knight
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This is so incredibly beautiful, Marival. You are great at writing sensual poems like this one which sound neither cheesy nor vulgar, but tender and moving.
Me encanta también la ilustración que has escogido. Es preciosa.
Kisses from Spain. If you ever visit I'd love to meet you in person. xxx

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
    The artist is Spanish, Victoria Fraces. I love her paintings.

    Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. Besitos y abrazos, guapa.

    Bests de California.

    Marival
reply by Heather Knight on 01-Jun-2023
    Nunca he oido hablar de ella, pero no se mucho de arte. Que hora es en California ahora? Me se la hora de la costa oeste pero nunca me acuerdo de PT.
    I've removed all the stress marks because I just noticed the silly A's in my first message. x
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
    Aqui son Las 10 y quince, Españo Español 9 horas Mas que California so alli deben ser las 7 Dela mañana.

    Besitos
Comment from GWHARGIS
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This was a very visual and evocative poem. The passion and the longing were very evident in each line. This was one of your longer poems. Not sure which style poem it is but I liked reading it. Great job on this. Gretchen

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
    It's a free verse. :) I write them once in a while.

    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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loved the ending - if something happens, you'll meet again!
very hopeful and loving poem
smooth flow and nice imagery

thank you for sharing
shelley :)



 Comment Written 01-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
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These are words of passionate love. Everyone wishes for that kind of love that speaks of enduring forever and waiting "where the sea meets the sky" even if they are parted for a time.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
    Thank you very much, big sister. I appreciate your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Love,
    Marival
Comment from royowen
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I think we all desire a relationship that is both physically and spiritually satisfying, but I'm afraid we must settle for something a little less, but this portrays a passionate woman who wants more than the superficial, beautifully written Gypsy. Well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy
reply by royowen on 01-Jun-2023
    Most welcome