Songs of Recovery
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "A Hope of Earth"A collection of poems around healing.
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A very moving verse wonderfully expressed with a strong message of hope woven throughout. I note it was written for a friend in treatment and your goodbye to that friend makes the verse even more poignant. I think your imagery in this verse is excellent and it is difficult to pick out an example because you are consistent all the way through. However, maybe the last stanza which concludes your verse so impressively: "in the steadiness and crystalline growth of rediscovery even though things may churn or quake"
A skilful and evocative message to us all! Well done. Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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A very moving verse wonderfully expressed with a strong message of hope woven throughout. I note it was written for a friend in treatment and your goodbye to that friend makes the verse even more poignant. I think your imagery in this verse is excellent and it is difficult to pick out an example because you are consistent all the way through. However, maybe the last stanza which concludes your verse so impressively: "in the steadiness and crystalline growth of rediscovery even though things may churn or quake"
A skilful and evocative message to us all! Well done. Debbie
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your kind words and I really appreciate your time. I'm glad the imagery serves it. I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
To compare a friend to the earth in all its dimensions, its beauty, its strength and resilience is the ultimate tribute. This is a beautiful letter of affection and support. Well done!
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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To compare a friend to the earth in all its dimensions, its beauty, its strength and resilience is the ultimate tribute. This is a beautiful letter of affection and support. Well done!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your time and effort in looking it over, and I hope you have a wonderful weekend.