Reviews from

Elena

This is a free verse poem.

5 total reviews 
Comment from lyenochka
Excellent
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Thank you for this lovely eulogy for this beautiful dancer. I liked the " sails
of my psyche," and the invoking of the sense of taste in " bitter taste of loss from the goblet of the ages."
Congratulations on the WIN! And Happy Birthday!!!

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
    Thank you so much, lyennochka! I really appreciate the birthday wishes. Thank you for the
    5 star review of my elegy
    poem for Elena. I hope you
    have a lovely Sunday. Many
    blessings to you. ~
Comment from JLR
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Writer you have my six and now I will give you my vote. To provide a tribute of the gifts of one departed, the writer surely would have have the first hand knowledge to the grace and beauty of the artist who's body was well tuned as to make motion to music a treat to ones soul, Great writing of verse in free style.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
    This is so sweet of you, JLR.
    Thank you so very much.
    I was in contact with the
    MADD chapter in Raleigh, NC
    where this horrible crime
    took place. What an unspeakable tragedy. I saw
    photos of Elena, such a
    lovely ballerina. Heartbreaking. As a child, I
    was a dancer, and my daughter was too. We still
    mourn for her. Thank you
    so much for caring. Peace
    be with you. Blessings ~
Comment from Andrea Kepple
Excellent
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What a nice way of memorializing Elena. Your poem is filled with the anguish someone experiences when they lose someone suddenly and in a way that should have been preventable.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
    Hello Andrea, this is such a
    tragic loss of a lovely and
    good young woman. And,
    tou're so right , this was a
    preventable crime. Thank
    you for taking the time to
    read and review my elegy
    poem. Peace be with you.
    Blessings ~
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Excellent
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A very poignant and well expressed verse about this ballerina's sad death at the hands of drunk driver. The writer is grieving her loss while imagining her beauty and elegance gracing the heavens. A stirring eulogy! Thanks for sharing. Debbie

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
    Thank you so much, Debbie.
    Your words are so kind and
    empathic for Elena. It hurt my heart to hear of her
    preventable death. Thank you
    for reading my elegy poem
    dedicated to her. Many
    blessings to you & your family.
Comment from JT traveller
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Just incredibly moving. You have a way with words that conveys a very strong message. An emotive poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Jacqueline

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
    Thank you so much, JT. I
    wanted to honor Elena's life
    with this elegy. Thank you for
    taking the time to read my
    poem, and for the 6 stars.
    Many blessings to you &
    your family. ~