Elena
This is a free verse poem.5 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for this lovely eulogy for this beautiful dancer. I liked the " sails
of my psyche," and the invoking of the sense of taste in " bitter taste of loss from the goblet of the ages."
Congratulations on the WIN! And Happy Birthday!!!
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
Thank you for this lovely eulogy for this beautiful dancer. I liked the " sails
of my psyche," and the invoking of the sense of taste in " bitter taste of loss from the goblet of the ages."
Congratulations on the WIN! And Happy Birthday!!!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much, lyennochka! I really appreciate the birthday wishes. Thank you for the
5 star review of my elegy
poem for Elena. I hope you
have a lovely Sunday. Many
blessings to you. ~
Comment from JLR
Writer you have my six and now I will give you my vote. To provide a tribute of the gifts of one departed, the writer surely would have have the first hand knowledge to the grace and beauty of the artist who's body was well tuned as to make motion to music a treat to ones soul, Great writing of verse in free style.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
Writer you have my six and now I will give you my vote. To provide a tribute of the gifts of one departed, the writer surely would have have the first hand knowledge to the grace and beauty of the artist who's body was well tuned as to make motion to music a treat to ones soul, Great writing of verse in free style.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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This is so sweet of you, JLR.
Thank you so very much.
I was in contact with the
MADD chapter in Raleigh, NC
where this horrible crime
took place. What an unspeakable tragedy. I saw
photos of Elena, such a
lovely ballerina. Heartbreaking. As a child, I
was a dancer, and my daughter was too. We still
mourn for her. Thank you
so much for caring. Peace
be with you. Blessings ~
Comment from Andrea Kepple
What a nice way of memorializing Elena. Your poem is filled with the anguish someone experiences when they lose someone suddenly and in a way that should have been preventable.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
What a nice way of memorializing Elena. Your poem is filled with the anguish someone experiences when they lose someone suddenly and in a way that should have been preventable.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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Hello Andrea, this is such a
tragic loss of a lovely and
good young woman. And,
tou're so right , this was a
preventable crime. Thank
you for taking the time to
read and review my elegy
poem. Peace be with you.
Blessings ~
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A very poignant and well expressed verse about this ballerina's sad death at the hands of drunk driver. The writer is grieving her loss while imagining her beauty and elegance gracing the heavens. A stirring eulogy! Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
A very poignant and well expressed verse about this ballerina's sad death at the hands of drunk driver. The writer is grieving her loss while imagining her beauty and elegance gracing the heavens. A stirring eulogy! Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much, Debbie.
Your words are so kind and
empathic for Elena. It hurt my heart to hear of her
preventable death. Thank you
for reading my elegy poem
dedicated to her. Many
blessings to you & your family.
Comment from JT traveller
Just incredibly moving. You have a way with words that conveys a very strong message. An emotive poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
Just incredibly moving. You have a way with words that conveys a very strong message. An emotive poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Jacqueline
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much, JT. I
wanted to honor Elena's life
with this elegy. Thank you for
taking the time to read my
poem, and for the 6 stars.
Many blessings to you &
your family. ~