Passion For Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Bullet "Book 3 of assorted poems
6 total reviews
Comment from Enrico Langfordino
Catch no deer today, thankfully ! Succinct and of this moment in time. In days gone by the need to feed the family was uppermost in most folks minds, but not today thankfully.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2023
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Catch no deer today, thankfully ! Succinct and of this moment in time. In days gone by the need to feed the family was uppermost in most folks minds, but not today thankfully.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2023
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Yes, I advocate hunting to feed the family. I do not advocate hunting simply for sport. I don't see where the sport is. These idiots shoot from their truck window! That's just my opinion. Kind comments affair review i'm always grateful may you have the best of days!
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Well said Lea.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
The title worried me at the start so your verse engaged me initially in an emotion of fearful expectation. That dreadful mindless sound of the bullet being fired. Fortunately with no success but only for today. Real emotional input here, well crafted. Thanks for sharing, Lea! Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2023
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The title worried me at the start so your verse engaged me initially in an emotion of fearful expectation. That dreadful mindless sound of the bullet being fired. Fortunately with no success but only for today. Real emotional input here, well crafted. Thanks for sharing, Lea! Debbie
Comment Written 05-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2023
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Thank you Debbie thank you so much for your review as always I'm happy to see your review! I appreciate your kind words and you're insightful. I hope you have an amazing day!
Comment from Lisasview
Lucky me found another poem of yours dear Lea... I never got what you had planned to send me?
This one is quite special...........................................
Lisa
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2023
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Lucky me found another poem of yours dear Lea... I never got what you had planned to send me?
This one is quite special...........................................
Lisa
Comment Written 30-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2023
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Thank you, Lisa, I'm glad you liked it! I'll send you the link. Thank you if you are reviewing your kind words. I'm glad you like this one.
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I was quite good,
Lisa
Comment from JSD
Wow. The last line hits again! I sometimes think the explanations underneath sort of spoil the fun, as I immediately saw what you were doing with your twist. But then I suppose it's nice to have one's suspicions confirmed! But then again, often the reader's interpretation is as valid as the writer's intentions. I always used to teach that the poem becomes the reader's, the moment it leaves the pen - if anyone uses pen any more! More nice internal rhyme and alliteration. Just great Lea. Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Wow. The last line hits again! I sometimes think the explanations underneath sort of spoil the fun, as I immediately saw what you were doing with your twist. But then I suppose it's nice to have one's suspicions confirmed! But then again, often the reader's interpretation is as valid as the writer's intentions. I always used to teach that the poem becomes the reader's, the moment it leaves the pen - if anyone uses pen any more! More nice internal rhyme and alliteration. Just great Lea. Well done!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much and you're right once. It comes out the end of my proverbial. Pant is for the world i'm just the Is progenitor. Thank you for all your reviews tonight. I really feel honored and privileged to have them and look forward to mar of yours Now that we come fans of one another I'll always know when you put something new out there and vice versa. Thank you for everything again have yourself a fabulous day!
Comment from Regina Elliott
Dear Poet, my late father was
abusive to us middle kids,
he didn't hit the youngest
and older siblings. He also
didn't hit my mother. He was a
selective abuser. I can really
identify with this poem. My
best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Dear Poet, my late father was
abusive to us middle kids,
he didn't hit the youngest
and older siblings. He also
didn't hit my mother. He was a
selective abuser. I can really
identify with this poem. My
best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Thank you Regina for your kind and insightful review. I am sorry you have to live through such a thing. Life definitely has its extremely unfair moments especially in the eyes of a person who suppose to protect you. Thank you again for your time I hope you are well and all this good!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
You seem to have the world's best interests in mind. I feel the same. I understand your analogy, particularly because I have spent most of my life teaching.
We have so much to come together and fix in this world. I'm surprised to read that Canada has problems. I'll pretend I didn't read that. lol :))
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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You seem to have the world's best interests in mind. I feel the same. I understand your analogy, particularly because I have spent most of my life teaching.
We have so much to come together and fix in this world. I'm surprised to read that Canada has problems. I'll pretend I didn't read that. lol :))
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Lol. Thank you again! Canada has same issues, perhaps on a smaller scale but they are there none the less. Thank you again for your insight on your way. Up looking through words and seeing what's really going on. I recognize the skill thank you! Thanks again for your fine writing and for your time have an awesome night!
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I was just ssying.this same thing to my husband. I think I used less adjectives through, but that's neither here nor there as they say.