Ukraine Still Stands
A 5-7-5 Poem9 total reviews
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 contest. All syllables are in check to relay a meaningful message of perseverance, strength in unity and hope. Nicely done on this strong entry.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 contest. All syllables are in check to relay a meaningful message of perseverance, strength in unity and hope. Nicely done on this strong entry.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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Thank you for a very understanding review
Comment from Wendy G
They have shown strength, courage and resilience along with determination. Your poem speaks this truth well. And the image is a fine choice. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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They have shown strength, courage and resilience along with determination. Your poem speaks this truth well. And the image is a fine choice. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your wonderful comments
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest. Yours is the best.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest. Yours is the best.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comments and six stars, Dear Gypsy, you have sent this review twice, you may need to try and retrieve one to preserve your six stars, again many thanks
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest. Yours is the best.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest. Yours is the best.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A very powerful stand-out winner (in my opinion, though I haven't read the rest!) I really appreciated your skilled and rhyming 5-7-5! The sentiments all the stronger for their succinctness. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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A very powerful stand-out winner (in my opinion, though I haven't read the rest!) I really appreciated your skilled and rhyming 5-7-5! The sentiments all the stronger for their succinctness. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is a pity that one leader of Russia wins the Nobel Peace prize and another becomes a despot. I despair for the Russian regime as it has taken a step backwards. Putin will go down in history as a maniac just like Hitler. A poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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It is a pity that one leader of Russia wins the Nobel Peace prize and another becomes a despot. I despair for the Russian regime as it has taken a step backwards. Putin will go down in history as a maniac just like Hitler. A poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This is a good piece. It's very provocative and emotive. It's a good, strong piece which will probably do quite well.
I agree with the sentiments in the author notes, it's much the same way i feel whenever the US interferes in the affairs of others for their own gain.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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Hi there,
This is a good piece. It's very provocative and emotive. It's a good, strong piece which will probably do quite well.
I agree with the sentiments in the author notes, it's much the same way i feel whenever the US interferes in the affairs of others for their own gain.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from SAPIRE
This poem is concise and to the point; I love the image and the illustration's eye-catching colors and illuminating. It gave me something to think about. The Ponder one is lovely and understanding.
Signed ASPIRE
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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This poem is concise and to the point; I love the image and the illustration's eye-catching colors and illuminating. It gave me something to think about. The Ponder one is lovely and understanding.
Signed ASPIRE
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from RobertaLee
Excellent form according to the contest rules. As to content, you have expressed well your disdain for Russia's leader who is so typical of avaricious bullies in many countries. Vivid illustration, well chosen.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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Excellent form according to the contest rules. As to content, you have expressed well your disdain for Russia's leader who is so typical of avaricious bullies in many countries. Vivid illustration, well chosen.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much
