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Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, this is a poem of truth. The ocean is so soothing, yet powerful, and we are so small in comparison to it--just a dot. Beautiful presentation. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Hi Gypsy, this is a poem of truth. The ocean is so soothing, yet powerful, and we are so small in comparison to it--just a dot. Beautiful presentation. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review , and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Gogyohka Poem- excellent picture presentation of a young girl by the ocean- inconsequential- nice - good description- contrasting size - person vs massive ocean - good job -AP
reply by the author on 31-May-2023
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I like your Gogyohka Poem- excellent picture presentation of a young girl by the ocean- inconsequential- nice - good description- contrasting size - person vs massive ocean - good job -AP
Comment Written 31-May-2023
reply by the author on 31-May-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
I think I've mentioned that I live on the ocean. When anxiety or life's issues start to take their toll on me, I go to the beach. The ocean and its seemingly infinite area put problems into perspective. This poem captured it. Gretchen
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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I think I've mentioned that I live on the ocean. When anxiety or life's issues start to take their toll on me, I go to the beach. The ocean and its seemingly infinite area put problems into perspective. This poem captured it. Gretchen
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Exactly, that is the way I feel about the sea's infinityand massive size. I would love to live close to the ocean.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
A fantastic gogyohka, Gypsy. I loved how you managed to blend the ocean tide in this. The young woman sitting on the sand gave way to the blend. Your words showed the gentleness of the tide. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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A fantastic gogyohka, Gypsy. I loved how you managed to blend the ocean tide in this. The young woman sitting on the sand gave way to the blend. Your words showed the gentleness of the tide. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Sitting on a beach listening and watching the ocean tides, or waves wash in and out is one of the most soothing sounds there is. You described it perfectly in this poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Sitting on a beach listening and watching the ocean tides, or waves wash in and out is one of the most soothing sounds there is. You described it perfectly in this poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
The sea does put everything into perspective! It's so massive that our troubles seem small in comparison. It's good to stop and think of the eternal when struggling with the day to day stuff. Well crafted gogyohka!
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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The sea does put everything into perspective! It's so massive that our troubles seem small in comparison. It's good to stop and think of the eternal when struggling with the day to day stuff. Well crafted gogyohka!
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Thank you, Sis :) I always appreciate your insightful and helpful reviews.
Love,
MariVal
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Yes. I do have a feeling of eternity when looking at the sea or a very big lake like Lake Superior which look like ocean because it's empty. I like the lotus flower in the end which means Zen to me.
Well done.
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Yes. I do have a feeling of eternity when looking at the sea or a very big lake like Lake Superior which look like ocean because it's empty. I like the lotus flower in the end which means Zen to me.
Well done.
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Yes, the lotus flower is a very zen symbol of beauty and rebirth. Thank you very much, Lisa. It's good to hear from you.
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Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, I am so glad I have a six left for this masterpiece, Gypsy.
An absolute delight. A Nirvana for all senses, and I love a nautical theme. I feel like your words brought me right there, to the "sea full of eternity "
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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Oh, I am so glad I have a six left for this masterpiece, Gypsy.
An absolute delight. A Nirvana for all senses, and I love a nautical theme. I feel like your words brought me right there, to the "sea full of eternity "
Comment Written 28-May-2023
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review!
I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
watching the waves go in and out is like breathing and hypnotises you...
great gogyohka - cool pics and colours, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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watching the waves go in and out is like breathing and hypnotises you...
great gogyohka - cool pics and colours, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 28-May-2023
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs