Learning To Fly
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Hi Debra, this is a lovely jaunty poem in this particular verse form which suits the rhythm of your walk and the mood of the morning so well! Actually, as soon as you said your hair was brushed up in a bun, I thought - bet you look glam! So much said here suggesting warmth, relaxation and carefreeness, conveyed (seemingly) effortlessly in this excellent post. Thanks for sharing. Enjoy the Bank Holiday! Debbie
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Hi Debra, this is a lovely jaunty poem in this particular verse form which suits the rhythm of your walk and the mood of the morning so well! Actually, as soon as you said your hair was brushed up in a bun, I thought - bet you look glam! So much said here suggesting warmth, relaxation and carefreeness, conveyed (seemingly) effortlessly in this excellent post. Thanks for sharing. Enjoy the Bank Holiday! Debbie
Comment Written 28-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Hi Debbie :) Thank you for your lovely feedback. Glad you enjoyed the Whitney! It's not very often I've been described as glam, but I'll wear the badge for a moment LOL! Thank you (blush!)
Hope you had a lovely long weekend :)
Debra x
Comment from jessizero
I like the way you told this story in your poem. It sounds like a great way to start your day. :) Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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I like the way you told this story in your poem. It sounds like a great way to start your day. :) Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 28-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind feedback, Jessi :)
Best wishes as alway, Debra
Comment from Regina Elliott
Dear Poet, a breezy and
whimsical poem. I love to
read happy poems, especially
if I've read a sad one to review
before a happy charming one
to lift my mood. Thank you
for that. Many blessings to
you. ~
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Dear Poet, a breezy and
whimsical poem. I love to
read happy poems, especially
if I've read a sad one to review
before a happy charming one
to lift my mood. Thank you
for that. Many blessings to
you. ~
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Comment Written 28-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind feedback, Regina :)
I'm glad you found my poem uplifting.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from royowen
I've never been stopped and told I look lovely, it must be the beard and the rugged appearance that is my shortcoming, heh heh, but I do know that it would make you feel good. Well done Debra, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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I've never been stopped and told I look lovely, it must be the beard and the rugged appearance that is my shortcoming, heh heh, but I do know that it would make you feel good. Well done Debra, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 28-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind feedback, Roy :)
Best wishes as alway, Debra
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