Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

What a great picture, Debra. I enjoyed your fun poem.
The rhymes and flow were smooth. I could see Molly
leading you to her favorite place. I'm thrilled she gets
to visit it often.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Thanks for your lovely feedback, Jan :)
Best wishes as always, Debra

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

Good picture, nice job.

I envy Moll's freedom of running wild and enjoying the splash.

It reminds me of my good old days on a sunny day jumping into the pool.

Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Thanks for your lovely feedback :)
Best wishes, Debra

Comment from Val Crisson

Excellent

What a fun read. I can see Moll pulling you with the leash. This poem teaches us what animals already know - that sometimes you must seize the moment. I love flow and excellent use of alliteration, especially in the last stanza.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, Val :)
Best wishes as always, Debra

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Dogs and water, yet they hate the ritual of the bath! How do they know the difference? Maybe it's the soap smell? A delightful poem and beautifully illustrated with Molly. Sending you my best today as always, dear Debra.
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Thanks for your lovely feedback, Sal - So true what you say about dogs and water - Molly loves water but really hates the bath and hates going for a groom even more! :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

Oh, I can see the joy unleashed as Molly splashed into the water. And I think you felt it too. Your poem is well rhymed and carries with it a cheerful tone. Really nice.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Thank you so much, Ginda, you're right, her joy is contagious! :)
Best wishes as always, Debra

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a sweet and endearing write as you take your dog for a walk and she jumps into the water, this poem is so enjoyable, I just wanted to jump into this moment and enjoy Molly having fun on her walk with you, a magical write Debra, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Thanks for your lovely feedback, Dolly, I'm happy that you enjoyed the read :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like how you prepared us for the Splash with the prelude of the "sea of scrub"! And Molly looks like a very happy puppy! So glad you and she are doing these walks. Enjoyed your poem!

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Thank you so much, Helen :)
Glad you enjoyed the read!
Best wishes as always, Debra x

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very good poem. I enjoyed it very much I wish you the very best in all of your writing. I hope you have a wonderful holiday weekend. God bless you. Patricia

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Thanks for your lovely feedback, Patricia, glad you enjoyed the read :)
Best wishes as always, Debra

Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Excellent

As you listen to Molly, I listen to my Seal Points, Bella and Smokey. Sometimes they look at me as if to say, "Why worry and hurry - chill out and enjoy all of this around you!"

We should all be so attuned to our pets.

This lovely rhyming poem is like a snapshot of your day. Thanks for sharing that with us.

xx
Pam

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Hello Pam :)
Our dogs are so much wiser than us!
Thank you for your lovely feedback and for sharing Bella and Smokey with me.
Best wishes, Debra x

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Thank you for sharing your adorable dog with us and her amusing antics. I enjoyed reading your rhyming poem with the abcb rhyme scheme. Well done and a delight to read.

Melissa

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, Melissa :)
Best wishes, Debra