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The world in question

will humankind advance?

2 total reviews 
Comment from papa55mike
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I love that one line, to understand the plight, has a lot of meaning today. In this selfish society, nobody will look away from their mirrors (iPhones). What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 30-May-2023

Comment from Steamroller1
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The window is small and the place seems dark with a little light shining through .The sun shining through the window. Trees blowing and a sunny day. Seem to brighten the place up and down.

 Comment Written 29-May-2023