Unsung Beauty
Free Verse Club32 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine tribute for this magnificent animal just wanting to live in peace in a world full of chaos and treachery. I enjoyed your poem Yvonne.
Did you mean (wishful) here
Is it (wishful) thinking,
Love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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A fine tribute for this magnificent animal just wanting to live in peace in a world full of chaos and treachery. I enjoyed your poem Yvonne.
Did you mean (wishful) here
Is it (wishful) thinking,
Love Dolly x x x
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Yes, it did. Thanks for catching that.
Comment from Pantygynt
I love the way you use rhyme in this free verse, showing it to be a valid poetic device that does not nod to dominate and bind the poem in tight schemes. So here we see majestic and myopic here hinting at both rhyme and alliteration, sometimes called front end rhyme. There is also blind and and kind. Excellent use of the device in free verse.
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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I love the way you use rhyme in this free verse, showing it to be a valid poetic device that does not nod to dominate and bind the poem in tight schemes. So here we see majestic and myopic here hinting at both rhyme and alliteration, sometimes called front end rhyme. There is also blind and and kind. Excellent use of the device in free verse.
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Thank you. I had a good teacher.
