Violated
Childhood Devastation39 total reviews
Comment from Andrea Kepple
This poem stirs the feelings of sadness and betrayal that goes hand-in-hand with this kind of offense against children. Well done. Best of luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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This poem stirs the feelings of sadness and betrayal that goes hand-in-hand with this kind of offense against children. Well done. Best of luck with the contest.
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Andrea, you have no idea how much your kind words mean to me. Thank you so very much my sweet friend.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job incorporating the required words
into your tragic poem, Mystery Author. Your words
flowed smoothly with no forced rhymes etc. The
story told was heartbreaking. The picture was adorable.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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You did a great job incorporating the required words
into your tragic poem, Mystery Author. Your words
flowed smoothly with no forced rhymes etc. The
story told was heartbreaking. The picture was adorable.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 28-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Jan, you have no idea how much your kind words mean to me. Thank you so very much my sweet friend.
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❤️🙏🌹
Comment from Eternal Muse
Very powerful. Every time I read of a new episode it fills me with deep grief over and over again.
This monsters will find their judgement in hell.
Excellent visuals, great rhyming, superb message and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-May-2023
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Very powerful. Every time I read of a new episode it fills me with deep grief over and over again.
This monsters will find their judgement in hell.
Excellent visuals, great rhyming, superb message and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-May-2023
reply by the author on 31-May-2023
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My dear EM, your kindness is more appreciated than you could ever know. Thank you so much and thank you also for the gift of six stars.
Comment from Monica Chaddick
So very sad, how often this happens. I was molested when I was three, by a teenaged boy down the street. He was my favorite person in the world, and of course I didn't realize at that age that what he was doing was so terrible. Great job on the poem.
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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So very sad, how often this happens. I was molested when I was three, by a teenaged boy down the street. He was my favorite person in the world, and of course I didn't realize at that age that what he was doing was so terrible. Great job on the poem.
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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You are so very kind Monica! That picture and the horrible acts were from my godfather when I was either 6 or 7. Not long after this picture was taken. The last line that says her silenced lied is because he told me if I told anyone something bad would happen to my day. I lived in fear, led to many illnesses and feelings of not worth love. I finally told my family after his death when I was about 40 and I thought it would kill my father. He felt so horrible.
The good news is, my godfather may have stolen all of my childhood and much of my adulthood, but thru faith and therapy, I am so full of love for others that I couldn't get out before. I know he was sick but aren't they all. I have found a way to forgive but never forget. I was told by therapists that for the gift to work I must share to help others. I don't take caring for others for granted and am a survivor now. I?m so sorry for what you went thru too! I know you have dealt w so much after l,osing your husband too! You don't know who I am here, but I pray for you.
Anyway, as far as the molestation, It is hard, but his poor daughter committed suicide at 18. So he destroyed a lot of people.I am thankful for friends like you and your kindness that help so much. Thank you for that my dear friend.
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You are in my prayers, as well. If you ever want to talk, I do write letters to pen pals (thru snail mail). Just let me know and we can exchange addresses.
Comment from BethShelby
This was an excellent use of the words to create a poem that is sad and sickening to have to acknowledge such things happen to innocent children. I hope it didn't happen to this sweet child in the picture but I fear that it did.
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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This was an excellent use of the words to create a poem that is sad and sickening to have to acknowledge such things happen to innocent children. I hope it didn't happen to this sweet child in the picture but I fear that it did.
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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You are so very kind Beth. That picture and the horrible acts were from my godfather when I was either 6 or 7. Not long after this picture was taken. The last line that says her silenced lied is because he told me if I told anyone something bad would happen to my day. I lived in fear, led to many illnesses and feelings of not worth love. I finally told my family after his death when I was about 40 and I thought it would kill my father. He felt so horrible.
The good news is, my godfather may have stolen all of my childhood and much of my adulthood, but thru faith and therapy, I am so full of love for others that I couldn't get out before. I know he was sick but aren't they all. I have found a way to forgive but never forget. I was told by therapists that for the gift to work I must share to help others. I don't take caring for others for granted and am a survivor now. It is hard, but friends like you and your kindness help so much. Thank you for that my dear friend.
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I had a feeling you might have been the victim. I'm glad you've worked through the pain and are helping others. I hope he didn't leave other victims behind.
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My cousin, his oldest daughter committed suicide at 18 years old 🥲
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Then I would suspect you know the reason why this probably happened. That is so sad. What about his other children?
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We never heard or asked.i just couldn't hurt my cousins by telling about me.in case they didn't know why their'sister killed herself.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned for the Borrowed Rhyme contest. You used very good descriptive words that went well with the picture you shared. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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This is a very well written poem you have penned for the Borrowed Rhyme contest. You used very good descriptive words that went well with the picture you shared. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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You are so very kind Teri, that picture and the horrible acts were from my godfather when I was either 6 or 7. Not long after this picture was taken. The last line that says her silenced lied is because he told me if I told anyone something bad would happen to my day. I lived in fear, led to many illnesses and feelings of not worth love. I finally told my family after his death when I was about 40 and I thought it would kill my father. He felt so horrible.
The good news is, my godfather may have stolen all of my childhood and much of my adulthood, but thru faith and therapy, I am so full of love for others that I couldn't get out before. I know he was sick but aren't they all. I have found a way to forgive but never forget. I was told by therapists that for the gift to work I must share to help others. I don't take caring for others for granted and am a survivor now. It is hard, but friends like you and your kindness help so much. Thank you for that my dear friend.
Comment from LateBloomer
I don't know which is worse, the sexual abuse or the mental abuse that went with the assault. Not only was your innocence stripped from you that day, but your whole feeling of security and trust was also violated.
Your poem reads and flows well and your message is clear. Beautiful photo from a happier time and place. Well done. Xo. M
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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I don't know which is worse, the sexual abuse or the mental abuse that went with the assault. Not only was your innocence stripped from you that day, but your whole feeling of security and trust was also violated.
Your poem reads and flows well and your message is clear. Beautiful photo from a happier time and place. Well done. Xo. M
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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You are so very kind Margaret. You know the incident like nobody else. But since this is part of my story, you have to hear it again. That picture and the horrible acts were from my godfather when I was either 6 or 7. Not long after this picture was taken. The last line that says her silenced lied is because he told me if I told anyone something bad would happen to my day. I lived in fear, led to many illnesses and feelings of not worth love. I finally told my family after his death when I was about 40 and I thought it would kill my father. He felt so horrible.
The good news is, my godfather may have stolen all of my childhood and much of my adulthood, but thru faith and therapy, I am so full of love for others that I couldn't get out before. I know he was sick but aren't they all. I have found a way to forgive but never forget. I was told by therapists that for the gift to work I must share to help others. I don't take caring for others for granted and am a survivor now. It is hard, but friends like you and your kindness help so much. Thank you for that my dear friend.
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very hard hitting poem on an unthinkable subject. It makes me so angry. Very cleverly worded and well presented.
I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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This is a very hard hitting poem on an unthinkable subject. It makes me so angry. Very cleverly worded and well presented.
I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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You are so very kind Jen. That picture and the horrible acts were from my godfather when I was either 6 or 7. Not long after this picture was taken. The last line that says her silenced lied is because he told me if I told anyone something bad would happen to my dad. I lived in fear, led to many illnesses and feelings of not worth love. I finally told my family after his death when I was about 40 and I thought it would kill my father. He felt so horrible.
The good news is, my godfather may have stolen all of my childhood and much of my adulthood, but thru faith and therapy, I am so full of love for others that I couldn't get out before. I know he was sick but aren't they all. I have found a way to forgive but never forget. I was told by therapists that for the gift to work I must share to help others. I don't take caring for others for granted and am a survivor now. It is hard, but friends like you and your kindness help so much. Thank you for that my dear friend.
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O.M.G. I didn?t realize that your poem was auto -biographical and the picture was you. I am even angrier now. I was abused by my father when I was seven. And other times when I was growing up. When I finally told my mom she said I was lying and wicked. When I look back at my life I think this has had a big influence on my relationships with men but hey ho you can?t turn back the clock. I am so glad that you have had therapy and dearly hope that you can enjoy the rest of your life. I did understand your last line by the way. Take care. Your friend Jen. X
Comment from Dawn Munro
Horrific is the only word that comes to mind as I so plainly visualize the meaning behind the words of your poem -- an incident or multiple incidents like this are indeed carried throughout life unless/until (with help) they are resolved. The first line says it all -- "all her emotions now were feign..."
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Horrific is the only word that comes to mind as I so plainly visualize the meaning behind the words of your poem -- an incident or multiple incidents like this are indeed carried throughout life unless/until (with help) they are resolved. The first line says it all -- "all her emotions now were feign..."
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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You are so very kind Dawn, That picture and the horrible acts were from my godfather when I was either 6 or 7. Not long after this picture was taken. The last line that says her silenced lied is because he told me if I told anyone something bad would happen to my dad. I lived in fear, led to many illnesses and feelings of not worth love. I finally told my family after his death when I was about 40 and I thought it would kill my father. He felt so horrible.
The good news is, my godfather may have stolen all of my childhood and much of my adulthood, but thru faith and therapy, I am so full of love for others that I couldn't get out before. I know he was sick but aren't they all. I have found a way to forgive but never forget. I was told by therapists that for the gift to work I must share to help others. I don't take caring for others for granted and am a survivor now. It is hard, but friends like you and your kindness help so much. Thank you for that my dear friend.
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Oh, I understood that last line -- it is so very powerful!
I get it -- trauma shapes us. In fact, I just posted a poem about one of mine... God bless you, my friend.
Comment from Sanku
very well done You have used the given rhymes adeptly to tell the story of an abused girl.. The lines are effective especially the last one .all the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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very well done You have used the given rhymes adeptly to tell the story of an abused girl.. The lines are effective especially the last one .all the best for the contest.
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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You are so very kind Santha. That picture and the horrible acts were from my godfather when I was either 6 or 7. Not long after this picture was taken. The last line that says her silenced lied is because he told me if I told anyone something bad would happen to my dad. I lived in fear, led to many illnesses and feelings of not worth love. I finally told my family after his death when I was about 40 and I thought it would kill my father. He felt so horrible.
The good news is, my godfather may have stolen all of my childhood and much of my adulthood, but thru faith and therapy, I am so full of love for others that I couldn't get out before. I know he was sick but aren't they all. I have found a way to forgive but never forget. I was told by therapists that for the gift to work I must share to help others. I don't take caring for others for granted and am a survivor now. It is hard, but friends like you and your kindness help so much. Thank you for that my dear friend.
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Thank you for honouring me with such an open reply .I could not read for some time after I read your poem .I shuddered for many seconds ...I am glad that you have forgiven ,though not forgotten and you are able to give love.I am not able to condone him by thinking 'he was sick' as you said arent we all in one way or the other?
