Taste of My Reality
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2 total reviews
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Very creative style and very well crafted poem. Your poem strikes a nerve, and even if many are disillusioned by thinking they are safe living in a cocoon, the reality is as you say. Evil is in action everywhere in the world!
Great post, Ricky!!
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Very creative style and very well crafted poem. Your poem strikes a nerve, and even if many are disillusioned by thinking they are safe living in a cocoon, the reality is as you say. Evil is in action everywhere in the world!
Great post, Ricky!!
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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I'm glad you were able to fully understand this piece Mario and thanks forever for reviewing.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, our government is into scare tactics and many people fall for them.
Yes because your new quest? (comma after 'Yes')
Yes this is Captain Bang Bang Ricky! (comma after 'Yes')
So be.prepared and realize. (omit period after 'be' and put in a space)
Yes this is your captain speaking and (comma after 'Yes')
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Yes, our government is into scare tactics and many people fall for them.
Yes because your new quest? (comma after 'Yes')
Yes this is Captain Bang Bang Ricky! (comma after 'Yes')
So be.prepared and realize. (omit period after 'be' and put in a space)
Yes this is your captain speaking and (comma after 'Yes')
Comment Written 23-May-2023
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Thanks for reading Barbara and I corrected this a while ago.
Doctor Ricky 1024
