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Comment from Anne Johnston
I love your story, Wendy. Looks like this man faces heavy fines, and picked the wrong motorist to get angry at. Let's hope he learned a valuable lesson.
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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I love your story, Wendy. Looks like this man faces heavy fines, and picked the wrong motorist to get angry at. Let's hope he learned a valuable lesson.
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Thank you for a super review. I hope he learned something! Lol.
Wendy
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Wendy, this is so funny and a perfect example of a successful 80 word flash fction. It fliws smoothly (no speeding here) and is timed with precision. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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Wendy, this is so funny and a perfect example of a successful 80 word flash fction. It fliws smoothly (no speeding here) and is timed with precision. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-May-2023
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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Thank you Ginda. Wonderful review! Very encouraging. Hope all is going as smoothly as possible for you and your husband.
Wendy
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I love this! An unmarked police car is trolling along and a man who is annoyed passes the car not knowing it is what it is he gets a hefty fine for obscenity and tail-gating and for driving with a hand outside the car and for the other car it is all in a day's work! Haha, I love it!
Thanks for the laughs!
Jesse
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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I love this! An unmarked police car is trolling along and a man who is annoyed passes the car not knowing it is what it is he gets a hefty fine for obscenity and tail-gating and for driving with a hand outside the car and for the other car it is all in a day's work! Haha, I love it!
Thanks for the laughs!
Jesse
Comment Written 24-May-2023
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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Thank you Jesse. Yes, the guy got justice for his rudeness. Lol. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reviewing.
Wendy
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Yes, I enjoyed it very much!
Jesse
Comment from miajaffri
Good writing and all said in 80 words. I sure would like to see more
police cars watching the traffic today. Since Covid lockdown, every time
I drive through the city streets, I see cars going through red lights.
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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Good writing and all said in 80 words. I sure would like to see more
police cars watching the traffic today. Since Covid lockdown, every time
I drive through the city streets, I see cars going through red lights.
Comment Written 23-May-2023
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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Thank you for reviewing. I glad you enjoyed the story. Wendy
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed this piece of flash fiction. I got a laugh out of the end when the man was ticketed by the woman. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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I enjoyed this piece of flash fiction. I got a laugh out of the end when the man was ticketed by the woman. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-May-2023
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Thanks so much Jessi. I appreciate your review, and I am glad you enjoyed this one.
Wendy
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Well told flash fiction story of two drivers, one who had the final smile one who didn't. The anger and aggression of some drivers is a worry on our roads. Good luck in the contest Wendy. I enjoyed it, cheers.
Valda
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Well told flash fiction story of two drivers, one who had the final smile one who didn't. The anger and aggression of some drivers is a worry on our roads. Good luck in the contest Wendy. I enjoyed it, cheers.
Valda
Comment Written 23-May-2023
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Thank you very much Valda. I appreciate your super review - and I am so glad you enjoyed this story.
Wendy
Comment from Faith Williams
Nice micro flash, Wendy. Australia definitely has some different lingo for driving than here in the US. Not to mention a fine for a body part outside the vehicle. Maybe such a fine would cut down on road rage.
I didn't expect that ending either. Great job, and best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Nice micro flash, Wendy. Australia definitely has some different lingo for driving than here in the US. Not to mention a fine for a body part outside the vehicle. Maybe such a fine would cut down on road rage.
I didn't expect that ending either. Great job, and best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 23-May-2023
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Thank you very much Faith, for the review and for the good wishes. Yes, these laws are a bit different from yours, but most people are happy to follow them for safety reasons.
Glad you enjoyed the story and its ending.
Wendy
Comment from w.j.debi
It looks like the bad driver was asking for it. If that was his typical way of driving, he was bound to run into an unmarked police car at some point. I love that she smiled and he didn't. LOL
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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It looks like the bad driver was asking for it. If that was his typical way of driving, he was bound to run into an unmarked police car at some point. I love that she smiled and he didn't. LOL
Comment Written 23-May-2023
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Thank you for this super review, and I am glad you enjoyed it! Appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Heather Bagley
This post was actually quite funny. I can imagine the "oh, shit" face the other driver had as she flipped on the siren. Wonderful little flash fiction! ~Heather
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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This post was actually quite funny. I can imagine the "oh, shit" face the other driver had as she flipped on the siren. Wonderful little flash fiction! ~Heather
Comment Written 22-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Than you for a super review. Yes, I believe he said at least that, or maybe more. Would love to have seen his face! And hers!
Wendy
Comment from T B Botts
I loved this entry Wendy. I watched a couple of impatient girls in a convertible down in Florida years ago. They did the same thing, harassing my dad in his car. Then they proceeded to speed around us and lost control of their car and smacked into a car in the next lane. It was poetic justice. We just laughed as we went by.
Thanks for sharing this.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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I loved this entry Wendy. I watched a couple of impatient girls in a convertible down in Florida years ago. They did the same thing, harassing my dad in his car. Then they proceeded to speed around us and lost control of their car and smacked into a car in the next lane. It was poetic justice. We just laughed as we went by.
Thanks for sharing this.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 22-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Thank you Tom for a super review. Also for the six lovely stars. Valued and appreciated. Well hopefully those girls learned a lesson, including not to harass older people.
Wendy