Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Another Wonderfully written Tanka with rich Art work and great Theme.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 23-May-2023

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reply by the author on 23-May-2023

Thank you very much, Dr Ricky. I appreciate your kind review.

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reply by the author on 23-May-2023

Thank you, dr Ricky. :) I appreciate you going through my old poems.

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Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

You certainly are the master of romantic poetry. You use scents to convey feelings and that is very different. This had all senses involved. Really beautiful and passion filled. Thank you for posting. Gretchen

 Comment Written 22-May-2023

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reply by the author on 22-May-2023

Thank you very much, Gretchen, for your positive review and helpful feedback.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Another well done sensual poem referencing the scent of lilacs and the sensation of sunshine on the skin. A sweet affirmation of forever love in this tanka!

 Comment Written 22-May-2023

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reply by the author on 22-May-2023

Thank you, big sister. I love to write tanka poems. It's suppose to be passionate and everlasting love...or loss. I am a very emotional person and a little dramatic lol

love
marival

Comment from Ginnygray

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this emotionally filled tanka! Very beautifully written and expressive! I especially liked the "lilac air I breathe" and "thousands of lifetimes"! Thank you for such a poignant poem of love!

 Comment Written 22-May-2023

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reply by the author on 22-May-2023

Thank you very much, Ginny, for your positive review and helpful feedback.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Breathing lilac air would be so wonderful. Lilacs are one of my favorite bushes. I love their scent. It's too hot to grow them in this part of Texas. I've tried. Nothing feels better than the sun on the skin. To me it almost feels healing. I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 22-May-2023

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reply by the author on 22-May-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

makes me think of the song a thousand years...
so romantic with excellent imagery using breathing and skin

really nice love tanka - thank you for sharing

shelley :)

 Comment Written 21-May-2023

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reply by the author on 22-May-2023

Thank you very much, Shelley. :)

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Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is still another well presented form written with very profound words. I appreciate so much your writing. I wish you the very best with everything that you do. Patricia.

 Comment Written 21-May-2023

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reply by the author on 21-May-2023

Thank you very much, Patricia. You are always kind and helpful and I appreciate it. May you have a wonderful day.

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Comment from royowen

Excellent

I love the exciting metaphoric references in the subject of the amorous love poem you've written dear Gypsy, you are not ont only the master of these forms, but the master of poetic device, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 21-May-2023

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reply by the author on 21-May-2023

Thank you very much, Roy! It's always good to hear from you. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement.

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reply by royowen on 21-May-2023

Most welcome