Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

I chuckled when I read this 5-7-5.
RW certainly was a gem to look at.
She really did set the world ablaze.
Beautiful picture and clever write.
Thanks for the morning smile to start my day :-)

 Comment Written 24-May-2023

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reply by the author on 24-May-2023

Thanks for your kind words for this post. Yes, RW was a stunning woman. The sketch certainly does her justice.

Mark

Comment from Father Flaps

Excellent

Hi Mark,
There was an episode of Seinfeld that starred Raquel Welch, if I remember correctly. They made her out to be very temperamental, but I think tempestuous would have been a good description, too. I just looked it up... it was in the Season 8 finale in 1997, called "The Summer of George". Bottom line, she had a temper! So your last line is perfect,
"ogle, but don't touch!"
Can I offer one minor suggestion?
sparkling diamond
dangles deep in her cleavage ~
ogle, but don't touch!

She was a beauty!

Nicely penned!
Cheers,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 24-May-2023

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reply by the author on 24-May-2023

Kimbob,

Yes, she was one hot looking woman. I edited it per your suggestion. Now my d-letter alliterations are closer. Thanks for the review too.

Mark

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was quite a poem, and that picture you used really sold it. I liked the last line especially. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 24-May-2023

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reply by the author on 24-May-2023

J

Pleased you liked my Haiku erotica. Thanks for your review.

Mark

Comment from RodG

Excellent

Haiku erotica--a new sub-genre. I must confess I would have a problem not ogling THAT diamond in its present location. That painting does arouse my interest considerably. Rod

 Comment Written 24-May-2023

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reply by the author on 24-May-2023

ROMEO guys do that looking!