Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

I feel torn and disconnected after reading this. There is torment within this piece, which puts weight on the reader's shoulders.

There are couple misspellings in one of the stanzas
Dear God?
Tis there ever going (going) to be?
Be room in my Tomb?
Coffins Lid always closed?
Darkened Clouds surround and confound me.
But im lost and (and) never Found,

 Comment Written 23-May-2023

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reply by the author on 23-May-2023

Yeah I didn't get a chance to review my work on this one
I was very busy at the time.
Thanks for that and also thanks for stopping by appreciate that Mia.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from royowen

Excellent

The wonderful thing is God said-in Psalm 103:12 As far as the east is from the west I have removed their sin, and will remember it no more." So there's no need to suffer anymore, beautifully written Ricky, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 21-May-2023

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reply by the author on 21-May-2023

Thanks and appreciated.
Maybe one day?
I can again learn to live.
Doctor Ricky

reply by royowen on 22-May-2023

Well done

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Again, thank you for sharing.

How doth one begin?.Begin to extinguish this Son? (you can omit the period after the question mark and put in a space.)

Diednow fourteen times! (Died now)

Help me God? (comma after 'me')

 Comment Written 21-May-2023

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reply by the author on 21-May-2023

Thanks Barbara and I think i got it right now.
Hard to tezton ghis Samsung
Doctor Ricky.