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Be Wee With Bea Part 3

Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "What Was vs What Can Be"
Third in a series is quite sad in the beginning.

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Comment from country ranch writer
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As bee learned sometimes we have to let go of things to be able to move on in our life and not look back.
We must move forward onto new adventures and learning about me thing. It can be a good time in you life if you keep an open mind while you do your stroll along the parh into the future.

 Comment Written 22-May-2023


reply by the author on 22-May-2023
    Thank you for such a delightful review. I love everything you said.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Once again, a heartwarming story. I enjoyed reading.

Recognizing, that as an unreachable goal, she settled for the food of her baby kitty, Scruffles and Sweet
Puppy. (omit 'that as')

another wise bear, and her crew.You may remember (space needed after the period)

To distract her tastebuds from the (taste buds, unless UK spelling)

 Comment Written 21-May-2023


reply by the author on 21-May-2023
    Thank you for your appreciative review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from aryr
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This was a fantastic start on a new adventure of the little bear, Bea, Liz. All of nature was getting geared up for that adventure. I can just imagine what Bea felt like as she took firm steps into the adventurous world. Very great job, well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 21-May-2023


reply by the author on 21-May-2023
    Thank you for your delightful review. I'm glad it struck you so. She was experiencing some of what I do when outside and practice a meditation I discovered in my Hopi Predictions book. Ir began with gifting the reader with an activity to become one with nature.
    What you do is chant Techqua Ikachi as you look at trees or something in nature. Do a soft gaze and keep chanting and notice what happens. It's wonderful. You can blink and move your eyes around, just don't zero in on any thing. Let me know.
reply by aryr on 21-May-2023
    Wow, that sounds interesting, Liz. You are so very welcome.
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
    Let me know if you experience it
reply by aryr on 22-May-2023
    Will do!
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
    Excellent
Comment from lyenochka
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I like how you took us through Bea's emotional journey from the sadness of loss to the hope in "what could be" in the future. It's sad she had to say goodbye to her new friends but it's also good she took care of herself. And I remember the dumpster that Doolie introduced Bea to but fresh fish sounds much better.

But the idea of having a spider's web made from ear to ear gives me creepy sensations! Yikes!

 Comment Written 21-May-2023


reply by the author on 21-May-2023
    Thank you for your amusing review. It makes me smile.
reply by lyenochka on 21-May-2023
    Actually, I was rethinking the symbolism of the catching bugs between the ears and thought it fits well with being careful about thoughts in the brain that needs to be caught dispatched!
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
    Big smile...great metaphor...my muses wrote that, I had little to do with that.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Well written and expressed continuation of this story with Bea as the focus as she begins her next "stroll of discovery." Now alone, she feels guided in her resolution to go "little by little " but she feels very alone without her companions and it is only the soothing sounds of nature that fill her with hope and motivation. Thanks for sharing. Debbie

 Comment Written 21-May-2023


reply by the author on 21-May-2023
    Thank you for your involved review. I'm glad you appreciated her.