One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from aryr
This was a great haiku, Gypsy. It was a fantastic ekphrastic. The dual pictures were awesome, they showed to moon spilling into the waterfalls. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. This was truly beautiful. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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This was a great haiku, Gypsy. It was a fantastic ekphrastic. The dual pictures were awesome, they showed to moon spilling into the waterfalls. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. This was truly beautiful. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
It is also Lune-like! Very nice artwork you chose to pair with your ekphrastic poet..
while you dream (sic)? - provides a different nuance to your thought.
Mark
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Gypsy,
It is also Lune-like! Very nice artwork you chose to pair with your ekphrastic poet..
while you dream (sic)? - provides a different nuance to your thought.
Mark
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I love the idea of the moon pouring her heart out while one's sleeps. That's a creative and wonderful concept. This is again, a perfect package. I'm amazed at how you continually do it. Thank you.
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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I love the idea of the moon pouring her heart out while one's sleeps. That's a creative and wonderful concept. This is again, a perfect package. I'm amazed at how you continually do it. Thank you.
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, exceptional six stars review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Ekphrastic poem- excellent supporting picture presentation- poem flows every well in a single train of thought - unbroken- pouring her heart out while you sleep- nice job AP
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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I like your Ekphrastic poem- excellent supporting picture presentation- poem flows every well in a single train of thought - unbroken- pouring her heart out while you sleep- nice job AP
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
That picture is well described in your poem! The moon looks like she's melting into the waterfall. I like your use of personification of the moon who seems to love the addressee as much as the poet.
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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That picture is well described in your poem! The moon looks like she's melting into the waterfall. I like your use of personification of the moon who seems to love the addressee as much as the poet.
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Thank you very much, big sister. I hope you are well. I appreciate your kind review.
Love,
Marival
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy Queen,
firstly, how can I not say how beautifully stunning this visual image and presentation is? The answer, I can't! It's absolutely magic.
The comfort these thirteen words achieve is a priceless gift of gratitude in wanting to believe and connect to its intent.
Most evenings, just before the sun goes down, I grab my ginger and lemon tea, walk to the front of my house, stand on the bank... look over the bay, watch the sea birds and water craft, those moored, those drifting past and watch as the sun goes down. I pay homage to another magic day in paradise in full gratitude and wait for the night star to appear on the northern sky as the Mother Nature throws the colour palette that melts my soul and allows me to know the absolute... we are all connected!
Loved this beautiful poem MariVal!
With our thoughts we create...
the gratitude of connection.
Warmest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Hi Gypsy Queen,
firstly, how can I not say how beautifully stunning this visual image and presentation is? The answer, I can't! It's absolutely magic.
The comfort these thirteen words achieve is a priceless gift of gratitude in wanting to believe and connect to its intent.
Most evenings, just before the sun goes down, I grab my ginger and lemon tea, walk to the front of my house, stand on the bank... look over the bay, watch the sea birds and water craft, those moored, those drifting past and watch as the sun goes down. I pay homage to another magic day in paradise in full gratitude and wait for the night star to appear on the northern sky as the Mother Nature throws the colour palette that melts my soul and allows me to know the absolute... we are all connected!
Loved this beautiful poem MariVal!
With our thoughts we create...
the gratitude of connection.
Warmest regards,
James.
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you, James, I like to imagine you in full communion with nature with your tea admiring Mother/Father God's gifts to us. Thank you for taking the time to write such generous and detailed review. I wish you a wonderful and peaceful weekend with Jade.
Gypsy hugs
"Allow nature's peace to flow into you as sunshine flows into trees." - John Muir
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Now... this quote soaked right into me.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I like the picture and really think your poem went with it beautifully. I have never thought of the moon as male or female. But have seen the moon referred to as a goddess. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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I like the picture and really think your poem went with it beautifully. I have never thought of the moon as male or female. But have seen the moon referred to as a goddess. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Yes, the moon is the goddess and the sun the god.
Thank you very much for your time. kind review, and helpfull feedback. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh a moon waterfall! way cool!!
not sure you need the comma on line one
great moon haiku! reads like a lullaby almost
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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ooh a moon waterfall! way cool!!
not sure you need the comma on line one
great moon haiku! reads like a lullaby almost
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you, Shelley. I really appreciate the excellent five stars review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Regina Elliott
Hi Gypsy, how sweetly beauteous and romantic.
Lovely and enchanting
imagery. I love the moon
in different styles of poetry,
although Japanese poetry is
some of the prettiest. The
artwork is ethereal. Have a
Happy Weekend! Blessings ~
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Hi Gypsy, how sweetly beauteous and romantic.
Lovely and enchanting
imagery. I love the moon
in different styles of poetry,
although Japanese poetry is
some of the prettiest. The
artwork is ethereal. Have a
Happy Weekend! Blessings ~
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you, Regina. I really appreciate the excellent five stars review. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
