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Comment from karenina
Why is it I always get hopelessly lost in the best possible way when you write of romance? Oh right-- it's you! Always the woman with the silken words which flow as beautifully as joyful tears down a lover's cheek!
Who else would come up with: "I traveled a sea of time to see"
You're the best...
Karenina
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Why is it I always get hopelessly lost in the best possible way when you write of romance? Oh right-- it's you! Always the woman with the silken words which flow as beautifully as joyful tears down a lover's cheek!
Who else would come up with: "I traveled a sea of time to see"
You're the best...
Karenina
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Wow, Thank you very much, Karenina, you are so kind to me. I appreciate your review and positive feedback. May you have a wonderful night.
Gypsy hugs
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You as well!
Comment from Ricky1024
Well presented with great Artwork.
The Moon is an amazing large glowing orb of various colors.
(according to the seasons)
The Moon mimics the Sun and the Sun lights the day.
Both part of Heavenly Father's Great show!
Yes, for us to observe each and every day!
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Well presented with great Artwork.
The Moon is an amazing large glowing orb of various colors.
(according to the seasons)
The Moon mimics the Sun and the Sun lights the day.
Both part of Heavenly Father's Great show!
Yes, for us to observe each and every day!
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. The picture was perfect because it showed the lovers in bed and I do believe it was the blind I saw. Your words were wonderful. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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This was a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. The picture was perfect because it showed the lovers in bed and I do believe it was the blind I saw. Your words were wonderful. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....my dingy was lost with all hands----well, my hands anyway---on second thout just forget it----that makes no sense and sounds none-too good anyway!
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....my dingy was lost with all hands----well, my hands anyway---on second thout just forget it----that makes no sense and sounds none-too good anyway!
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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LoL
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nice poem and the format that you have chosen. I enjoyed it very much it is beautifully presented. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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This is a very nice poem and the format that you have chosen. I enjoyed it very much it is beautifully presented. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia
Comment Written 20-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This moon's silver light sneaking through the blinds resembles it's spying on this couple. Yet, it highlights all the mountains, valleys, peaks of her curvy body. That's very sensual. This is another excellent poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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This moon's silver light sneaking through the blinds resembles it's spying on this couple. Yet, it highlights all the mountains, valleys, peaks of her curvy body. That's very sensual. This is another excellent poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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This means a lot coming from the queen of romance. :)
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good morning, Gypsy,
Truly one of your most beautiful and moving tankas that I have read to date.
I appreciate everything about your offering ranging from the form to imagery to message and the implementation of "sea to see."
A most memorable poetic offering.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Good morning, Gypsy,
Truly one of your most beautiful and moving tankas that I have read to date.
I appreciate everything about your offering ranging from the form to imagery to message and the implementation of "sea to see."
A most memorable poetic offering.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
A guess a "sea of time" is like a lifetime of seeking and yearning for that one true love. I also sense that the lovers are intimately acquainted with all the details of each other.
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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A guess a "sea of time" is like a lifetime of seeking and yearning for that one true love. I also sense that the lovers are intimately acquainted with all the details of each other.
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Yes, I like that line of "a sea of time". I used it a couple of times. Thank you very much, big sister. :) may you have a wonderful day.
Love,
Marival
Comment from l.raven
Hi Marival, this reminds me of a poem
I wrote about...just staying in bed
and hoping the sun doesn't find the
morning...I love your wording...I so
remember those days before my husband passed...
I love your poem my sweet friend...
picture perfect...very nicely written...
love you...linda xxoo
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Hi Marival, this reminds me of a poem
I wrote about...just staying in bed
and hoping the sun doesn't find the
morning...I love your wording...I so
remember those days before my husband passed...
I love your poem my sweet friend...
picture perfect...very nicely written...
love you...linda xxoo
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Love,
Marival
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your always so welcome beautiful
you...love xxoo
Comment from Gloria ....
Very good tanka here, as the moon certainly does traverse across vast seas to reflect its light onto Earth.
A little vicarious enjoyment I would imagine for the moon.
Beautiful presentation and a pleasure to read today.
Gloria
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Very good tanka here, as the moon certainly does traverse across vast seas to reflect its light onto Earth.
A little vicarious enjoyment I would imagine for the moon.
Beautiful presentation and a pleasure to read today.
Gloria
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs