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"The Gift of Life 2003"

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Comment from Mia Twysted
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Very inspiring and painful all at the same time. You have lived through something traumatic and while you share your pain you also speak of the good that came out of the bad. You speak of how your son goes on.

 Comment Written 23-May-2023


reply by the author on 23-May-2023
    Thanks again for picking up on this one Mia and have a wonderful and blessed rest of your day!
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Again, thank you for sharing.

Roses are Blood Red and the bleed is all within me. (blood???)

Of course it was and always will be. (comma after 'course')

 Comment Written 19-May-2023


reply by the author on 19-May-2023
    This is now a rewrite there's a whole second half to it I corrected the one error and your question will be answered.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky