One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with vivid imagery and great sensory appeal. With or without the photo. I can visualize the whole scene.
I especially liked:
her ashes drift
in summer's night breeze --
(Soulful)
Also, good vocabulary choice on the word, drizzle.
Well done. Excellent writing. A pleasure to read. Still behind on reviewing--better late than never. Xo. M
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with vivid imagery and great sensory appeal. With or without the photo. I can visualize the whole scene.
I especially liked:
her ashes drift
in summer's night breeze --
(Soulful)
Also, good vocabulary choice on the word, drizzle.
Well done. Excellent writing. A pleasure to read. Still behind on reviewing--better late than never. Xo. M
Comment Written 22-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, exceptional six stars review, and kind feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Regina Elliott
Hi Gypsy, this is such a serene nature setting about
scattering a deceased loved
ones ashes. The stars also
enhances with the beauty of
the eventide. Many of the
spring season's blessings to
you. ~
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Hi Gypsy, this is such a serene nature setting about
scattering a deceased loved
ones ashes. The stars also
enhances with the beauty of
the eventide. Many of the
spring season's blessings to
you. ~
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your review and feedback. May you have a wonderful night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Kerry Foley
Absolutely stunning haiku.
Your artwork in color choices really enhanced its beauty.
Wonderfully done hugs!
-Kerry
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Absolutely stunning haiku.
Your artwork in color choices really enhanced its beauty.
Wonderfully done hugs!
-Kerry
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you, Kerry. I really appreciate the excellent five stars review.
Gypsy hugs
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:) I didn't have any more sixes or I would've used it. :))
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi MariVal,
This is good personification but it seems if ashes are falling in Summer, then it might have been hit by lightning. That makes it more the Tree of Death and not the Tree of Life.
It is beautiful artwork.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Hi MariVal,
This is good personification but it seems if ashes are falling in Summer, then it might have been hit by lightning. That makes it more the Tree of Death and not the Tree of Life.
It is beautiful artwork.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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The light is from a dead woman's ashes falling over the tree of life so it's a zen way to see the complete cycle of life.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
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Thanks for the clarification, Gypsy.
You're welcome.
Have a great weekend.
Joan
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You too, Joan. :)
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Stunning words and presentation. One can see it as a joyous celebration of a life and being remembered by those she left behind. It also can be seen as the true circle of life as life continues after she departs.
The beauty of it is that any interpretation by the reader is the right one.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Stunning words and presentation. One can see it as a joyous celebration of a life and being remembered by those she left behind. It also can be seen as the true circle of life as life continues after she departs.
The beauty of it is that any interpretation by the reader is the right one.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Yes! you got it Mary, different people get a different visual image.
Thank you for the exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
Definitely a great haiku, Gypsy. This truly awesome. Your words were never truer. The picture of the tree of life were never truer. I really enjoyed your words. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Definitely a great haiku, Gypsy. This truly awesome. Your words were never truer. The picture of the tree of life were never truer. I really enjoyed your words. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gyspy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a beautiful poem. Life is a complete circle, not only for humans but all living creatures and I feel this poem describes that.
in summer's night breeze -- I'm wondering this it shouldn't be ' summer night's breeze' because the breeze occurred at night. It just might be me.
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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This is a beautiful poem. Life is a complete circle, not only for humans but all living creatures and I feel this poem describes that.
in summer's night breeze -- I'm wondering this it shouldn't be ' summer night's breeze' because the breeze occurred at night. It just might be me.
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
Of course the tree of life in reality is the tree which stole the life of Jesus, but it was the tree of life for those of us who realise why Jesus died and was raised to life, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Of course the tree of life in reality is the tree which stole the life of Jesus, but it was the tree of life for those of us who realise why Jesus died and was raised to life, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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Well done
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
I was really touched by this exceptional haiku poem! The way you use "drizzle" makes the woman 's passing seem like a celebration. You've chosen very beautiful graphics.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Gypsy,
I was really touched by this exceptional haiku poem! The way you use "drizzle" makes the woman 's passing seem like a celebration. You've chosen very beautiful graphics.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, exceptional six stars review, and kind feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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You?re welcome, Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Cool poem which makes me think of how much a life means even after the loved one dies. The drift off but the love that remains feeds the life that remains in all who cherished that person. In the Bible, in Proverbs, it says that Wisdom is the tree of life to all who hold on to her.
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Cool poem which makes me think of how much a life means even after the loved one dies. The drift off but the love that remains feeds the life that remains in all who cherished that person. In the Bible, in Proverbs, it says that Wisdom is the tree of life to all who hold on to her.
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you very much, big sister. Roy mentioned that bible verse too. May you have a wonderful weekend!
Love,
Marival