Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 158 "Next to You"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from aryr
This was a fantastic tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures were wonderful of the dawn and the row of flowers were stupendous. I loved your words because they proved to be true. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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This was a fantastic tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures were wonderful of the dawn and the row of flowers were stupendous. I loved your words because they proved to be true. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Ricky1024
Next to You
A Tanka was well written,, emotonal.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
Read a d flowed well with no grammar issues.
Thanks for sharibg.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Next to You
A Tanka was well written,, emotonal.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
Read a d flowed well with no grammar issues.
Thanks for sharibg.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I really enjoyed reading this romantic poem. I do remember those 'sleepless night of lovemaking'. After almost 46 years of marriage, sleep is too important. LOL
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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I really enjoyed reading this romantic poem. I do remember those 'sleepless night of lovemaking'. After almost 46 years of marriage, sleep is too important. LOL
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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LoL
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
well, being in socal, it's definitely hazy! LOL!
i like the image of the dawn taking it's time to rise as you watch it from the bed...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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well, being in socal, it's definitely hazy! LOL!
i like the image of the dawn taking it's time to rise as you watch it from the bed...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 18-May-2023
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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I'm a Cali girl too lol
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback .
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was the moments after. The warm afterglow of love. When the energy is spent and the inhibitions shed. Love the unhurried pace of the morning. The rose colored dawn showing up on her terms. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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This was the moments after. The warm afterglow of love. When the energy is spent and the inhibitions shed. Love the unhurried pace of the morning. The rose colored dawn showing up on her terms. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 18-May-2023
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback .
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi MariVal,
BTW, I love your names... both of them!
I think I will switch around to and at will to how I read what you have posted?
Hmmmmm, maybe I should have another name for you when visiting these love-charged Tanka poems?
Pequena descarda sexy, may describe the sense you painted on this lazy hazy rose dawn... the time when you want her time to pass as slowly as possible to allow it to stretch in time and intensity.
Always a pleasure to read and view a poet/writer who prides themselves on presentation and delivery.
With our thoughts we create...
an Alaskan Winter.
Warmest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Hi MariVal,
BTW, I love your names... both of them!
I think I will switch around to and at will to how I read what you have posted?
Hmmmmm, maybe I should have another name for you when visiting these love-charged Tanka poems?
Pequena descarda sexy, may describe the sense you painted on this lazy hazy rose dawn... the time when you want her time to pass as slowly as possible to allow it to stretch in time and intensity.
Always a pleasure to read and view a poet/writer who prides themselves on presentation and delivery.
With our thoughts we create...
an Alaskan Winter.
Warmest regards,
James.
Comment Written 18-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Hello, James, it's always a pleasure to read your intuitive insightful reviews. You may call me any name you want as long as it's done with that 'James flair'.... Gypsy is my alter ego's name... my mischievous playful girl. Marival is the name my friends and family call me. Gypsy Queen is more regal, fanstorians gave me this one. One fanstorian calls me Magic Unicorn... hahaha. That one makes me laugh.
Gypsy hugs
"May your sails always billow and your boat remain free from the doldrums. May your voyage be triumphant." - anonymous
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Magic unicorn... What the?
Guess you may be a mythical creature? But more like a magical human being to me.
And here I thought It was I who named You Gypsy Queen... just goes to show, we all reuse someone else's words... but never their emotions or connection.
Comment from kahpot
The comfort of our partners after an erotic night is so magical, an excellent tanka, in a short poem you have describe a lifetime of love, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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The comfort of our partners after an erotic night is so magical, an excellent tanka, in a short poem you have describe a lifetime of love, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 18-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely romantic poem. I guess this is likely during the honeymoon and before the kids woke them up before the the arrival of dawn which is no longer taking her time.
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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A lovely romantic poem. I guess this is likely during the honeymoon and before the kids woke them up before the the arrival of dawn which is no longer taking her time.
Comment Written 18-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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LoL, yes, before the kids.
Thank you very much, big sister. I love you. Have a wonderful day.
Marival
Comment from royowen
A fair example of transition to the first two lines to the second, set, I like the tanka, it gives a little more leeway, the shorter the transitions the better thought out, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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A fair example of transition to the first two lines to the second, set, I like the tanka, it gives a little more leeway, the shorter the transitions the better thought out, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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I love tanka, is my favorite Japanese poetry forms.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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It?s great