Comment from Aiona

Excellent

It's a cute haiku. It follows the 5-7-5 syllable format. The second line feels weird. I've never heard the phrase "marched house" before, I guess. I like the "single line" part, because that is indeed what ants do, and it paints the picture. But maybe... making it more like soldiers, it would be "single file." And if you wanted to deepen the soldier analogy, you could say "stake."

 Comment Written 18-May-2023

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reply by the author on 19-May-2023

Thank you, Aiona, I made the
corrections. I really appreciate this. Have a wondrous poetry weekend. ~

Comment from Mario PIERRE

Excellent

Nice haiku! I like when poems reveal nature and people living around it- like you mentioned it's also a season for newborn lambs, etc.
The format and the syllable count conform to the haiku. Good job! Good luck with the contest

 Comment Written 18-May-2023

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reply by the author on 19-May-2023

Thank you so much, Mario.
It's very kind of you to stop
by and give me a 5 star review. I hope you have a
wondrous poetry weekend.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Is a mow day, a reference to mowing the grass? Just wondering, these ants know how to strip all the excess shoots as nature makes good use of everything, I enjoyed your write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-May-2023

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reply by the author on 19-May-2023

Hi! Yes, mow day means we're going to mow. Thank
you so much for the 5 stars.
It's very kind of you. Have a
wondrous poetry weekend.