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Viewing comments for Chapter 156 "Undress Me"Romantic Tanka Poems
5 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
This was very exotic and interestingly written rich in theme and imagery.
As always, there was no Grammar issue and have a pleasant evening.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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This was very exotic and interestingly written rich in theme and imagery.
As always, there was no Grammar issue and have a pleasant evening.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Thank you, Dr Ricky
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again, you tantalized our senses with your beautiful words. You are great at choosing words that come together to reach each part of us. Thank you for doing that.
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Once again, you tantalized our senses with your beautiful words. You are great at choosing words that come together to reach each part of us. Thank you for doing that.
Comment Written 16-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thank you very much, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was a fantastic gogyohka poem, Gypsy. I loved how you created the tease of Mother Nature into this one. The dual pictures were inducing as ever. This was an amazing job. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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This was a fantastic gogyohka poem, Gypsy. I loved how you created the tease of Mother Nature into this one. The dual pictures were inducing as ever. This was an amazing job. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 16-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thank you very much, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from lyenochka
What a sultry poem! I guess all those sensations of soft petals and juicy peaches bring a sense of sensuality. Then the switch to the texture of the tree bark shows us it's nature that's the flirt.
reply by the author on 15-May-2023
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What a sultry poem! I guess all those sensations of soft petals and juicy peaches bring a sense of sensuality. Then the switch to the texture of the tree bark shows us it's nature that's the flirt.
Comment Written 15-May-2023
reply by the author on 15-May-2023
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Yes, I went for something a little different to keep it interesting. Thank you for reviewing, big sister, you are very kind.
Love,
Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
lol love that last line!
the biting part - not so much and i don't like peaches lol
still a great gogyohka with cool imagery and emotion and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 15-May-2023
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lol love that last line!
the biting part - not so much and i don't like peaches lol
still a great gogyohka with cool imagery and emotion and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 15-May-2023
reply by the author on 15-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs