Come and Get Your Love
Failure is our biggest nemesis.4 total reviews
Comment from Mary Shifman
This story is engaging and kept me hanging on to the very end. It took me a bit to realize that it was a sort of tragic "Groundhog Day" theme. I liked the ending. I hope you win the contest.
reply by the author on 31-May-2023
This story is engaging and kept me hanging on to the very end. It took me a bit to realize that it was a sort of tragic "Groundhog Day" theme. I liked the ending. I hope you win the contest.
Comment Written 22-May-2023
reply by the author on 31-May-2023
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You're psychic, Mary! Thanks for the comments.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from pookietoo
I don't get this story. Where in your story does it say Captain Cole died. I really need to know before I vote on the story. Take care, smile. Best wishes to you.
Please tell where it says Captain Cole died.
Who is the only survivor?
I don't get this story. Where in your story does it say Captain Cole died. I really need to know before I vote on the story. Take care, smile. Best wishes to you.
Please tell where it says Captain Cole died.
Who is the only survivor?
Comment Written 21-May-2023
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an interesting story for the competition. story lines were clear easy to follow. The emotions and actions of the characters made sense. enjoy your story and it seemed possible. Excellent writing!
reply by the author on 31-May-2023
This is an interesting story for the competition. story lines were clear easy to follow. The emotions and actions of the characters made sense. enjoy your story and it seemed possible. Excellent writing!
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 31-May-2023
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Thank you, Alexandria!
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You're welcome Michael!
Comment from JT traveller
I do hope this is the start to a novel! Your descriptions are on point! Very engaging writing. Imaginative, compelling. I absolutely loved it. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 31-May-2023
I do hope this is the start to a novel! Your descriptions are on point! Very engaging writing. Imaginative, compelling. I absolutely loved it. Jacqueline
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 31-May-2023
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Thank you for your comments, Jacqueline.