Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Beautiful, I am reading about loneliness, sadness, and a touch of envy, as someone is watching the growth of love and family, as she pines for something or someone, she was unable to reach, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 18-May-2023

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reply by the author on 18-May-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was a wonderful free verse, Gypsy. I liked the dual pictures but was sadden as I read the part addressing Emily. The first part showed the lovers in unison but the second part showed Emily all alone, rather creative thinking. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 13-May-2023

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reply by the author on 14-May-2023

It has to be a baby bird, the tragedy is it fell out of the nest and left to die, you can't use a full grown bird.

Thank you very much for your time, kind review ,and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 14-May-2023

Wow, I was way off! You are so welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

These two poems bring me back to a conversation my husband and I had a few days ago. My 19-year-old granddaughter and her boyfriend moved in together about 6 or 7 months ago. He's commuting each day to a four-year college and working. She's attending a junior college and working. She just found out he didn't attend any of his classes this semester and only worked. He didn't tell her but has registered at the junior college for the fall. She just got accepted in the veterinarian-tech program at school. My husband question was, why do these young girls fall for guys like this. He used one of our daughters-in-law as an example too. She had previously been married to a real jerk who did her wrong, emotionally. I had previously been married to an abuser. My husband finally decided it's just something we needed to go through. I don't have an answer for him. I guess I never did get to the review. Your poems are emotional and great.

 Comment Written 13-May-2023

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reply by the author on 14-May-2023

Yes, you are right :(

It has to be a baby bird, the tragedy is it fell out of the nest and left to die, you can't use a full grown bird.

Thank you very much for your time, kind review ,and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi Gypsy Queen,
an interesting observation when you switch gears, as I, the reader actually believe it is all beautiful and rosy watching the painted image of a blossoming love and life commitment being played out...

And then you take this whole love story to a new level... a viewer watching this unfold and feeling the loss and sadness that she herself has not been able to achieve, or hold on to, yet I feel the desire to share in this couple's fresh love so much.

Ah, there are so many avenues of thought that takes this emerging union to that of lost unions. I sense a real pining and desire that Emily desires what this couple share... the memories of Emily's past possibly?

Clever and creative is the words I'd use to describe this free verse... so beautiful, yet so sad.

that mean(s) so much...

With our thoughts we create...
a wish for warmth.

Kind regards,
James

 Comment Written 12-May-2023

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reply by the author on 14-May-2023

Thank you , James. I went back and forth with mean/s and I got it wrong. ... sigh...

I try to keep it interesting and write a variety of topics, although lately I've been stuck on romance. Today I went back to Haiku and wrote two in 20 minutes. I was busy with the family all day and got home late almost missing the 9 pm deadline. My goal is two poems a day.

Thank you for reviewing my poem, my friend. You are very kind.

Cheers,

Gypsy extra hugs

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You start your post with an ideal and romantic view of love and sometimes this is not the reality of the situation, but the main thing is that the union is close, loyal and warm and love connects souls and hearts are tender, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 12-May-2023

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reply by the author on 12-May-2023

Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

aw sorry emily hasn't found her 'one' yet... life is mysterious - sometimes soulmates get lost... then hit by trains LOL

a great free verse in the sunset!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 12-May-2023

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reply by the author on 12-May-2023

Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs