Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Absolutely horrible conditions. Great descriptions though.

Stained and odered beds (odored? but really still isn't a word because odor is a noun, you may want to choose another word.)

God, and, how can this be true? (I think it reads better without the 'and' but if you want the 'and' omit the comma after it.)

 Comment Written 11-May-2023

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reply by the author on 11-May-2023

I rewrote this and edited hours ago.
And, thanks for your review again Barbara.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Mario PIERRE

Excellent

Great post again, Ricky!!! The descriptions are vivid and true to life, so much so that we can see, senseand smell the things described here. Homelessness is the pandemic of the 21st century!!
I enjoyed it!

 Comment Written 11-May-2023

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reply by the author on 11-May-2023

Thanks Mario.
Being homeless has giving me a new perspective on life.
I've helped quite a few human beings by handing them out $20 bills when things were bad.
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I slept and lived with them in shelters.
I learned to love them and also the staff.
Homeless people have different reasons.
Reasons for why they are homeless.
While, some like me.
Had done nothing wrong, others brought themselves to that point.
Why?
Well because they don't know who they are or what their life is about.
These are the addicted those who are chronically ill from alcohol and drugs.
24.
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky