Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this journey with us. I am enjoying reading.

"Yes they are out there and they need me!" (comma after 'Yes' and one after 'there')

"You hath now finally inspired Me son." (comma after 'Me')

 Comment Written 10-May-2023

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reply by the author on 10-May-2023

Thanks Barbara this one only took 15 seconds to correct!
Ricky

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

Truly inspiring Ricky. There are times when we all need reinforcement of our beliefs. Your poem provides this. The repetition serves to reinforce your message. Take care, Jacqueline

 Comment Written 10-May-2023

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reply by the author on 10-May-2023

When I wrote this in a Catholic Church.
I figured that I may use it as my testimony next month in the Latter-Day Saint Church of Jesus Christ.
Again for reviewing.
On to the last!
Doctor Ricky