Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

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 Comment Written 13-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023

Thank you, Karen ! Sal :))

Comment from Father Flaps

Exceptional

Hi Sally,
Somehow, I missed this chapter, so am catching up. It's nice that Simon has found his bride-to-be. I noted that angels are looking in the windows. So they are still hanging around.
"To the angels peering in the window, it was love, blossoming in spring."
I am assuming that Fee's crooked lawyer, Kenny Farnsworth, has put a plan together to free the evil underworld villain. Fortunately, his slippery stunt hasn't gone unnoticed. Tommy spied the linen delivery, and later, the missing third member of the delivery detail. The Sheriff has also noticed something is up...
Lowering my voice, I said, "Emmanuel, I think the guy conversing with Nurse Lucy is not who he appears to be, possibly attempting to get a coded message to Elling."
"I was just about to go over there when I saw you, Tommy. Something's off."

So, something is going down on Friday. Tommy and Sheriff Emmanuel will be ready. But lawyer Farnsworth is an eel. It should be quite a showdown!

"I (contined) to look in every direction, scanning the sea of blue uniforms." ... (continued)

Terrific chapter, Sally. I'll get to #27 later today.

Hugs,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 24-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Dear Kim, thank you for the lovely review and generous six stars, and times two in one week! I'm one blessed writer! You're the only one that caught continued. I need those eagle eyes! Blessings to you and yours as always! Is everyone well and recovered? I hope so!
Sal xoxo's

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

You certain manage to paint lovely word picture of dinner parties and wedding dresses. I am enjoying the story. I concerned about what happened at the hospital when the lights went out and the man disappeared.

 Comment Written 17-May-2023

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reply by the author on 18-May-2023

Thank you for the lovely review and insightful comments. Both are so appreciated. Blessings! Sal XOs

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Great chapter again Sally. Realistic descriptions of the storm hitting but still with a good outcome for Tommy. Lovely finish with Betty Jo's unworn wedding dress. All tying together nicely. Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 16-May-2023

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reply by the author on 18-May-2023

Dear Valda,
Thank you for the lovely review and insightful comments. Both are so appreciated. I'm glad you are enjoying my book.
Blessings! Sal XOs

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

This is so true. It goes along with my belief in past lives which I am aware few are, but which I exemplified in my book 'The Tor': "The longer I live, the more I realize there's no such thing as coincidence."
This is funny but very realistic: "After the message, I let out a whoop-whoop, drawing a few looks from the hospital staff." This will draw the reader in: "Yes, I will be ready on Friday too, Fitzgerald Elling. You'll never escape me."
Great use of the metaphor: "Betty Jo's bedroom was a museum of old memories," Good work

 Comment Written 16-May-2023

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reply by the author on 19-May-2023

Thank you for the lovely review and insightful comments. Both are so appreciated. Blessings to you always.
Sal xoxo's

reply by Liz O'Neill on 19-May-2023

***Smile***

Comment from Shirley McLain

Exceptional

I can't wait to read what happens next with Fee and also the wedding. You did a great job as always. I didn't see one thing to tell you about, but I never do. Have a great evening. Shirley

 Comment Written 16-May-2023

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reply by the author on 18-May-2023

Shirley dear, thank you for the lovely review and super stars! I'm so honored and blessed! I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter too. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

A lovely chapter with this imminent wedding. Wondering why Betty Jo never wore her gown? But great that it fits Candace. Hope they will find that third guy quickly! He's up to no good. Another excellent chapter.
Well done.
Wendy

 Comment Written 16-May-2023

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reply by the author on 18-May-2023

Thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments, Wendy. Both mean so much. Sending along my very best.
Sal XOs

Comment from Ben Colder

Exceptional

You know? Sometimes I watch the program cold case files and amazed of how long it is in man's timing before God's words are revealed. "Everything done in secret comes to light, either good or bad." Well done, Sal as always. You are a jewel.

 Comment Written 16-May-2023

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reply by the author on 18-May-2023

Dear Ben,
Thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments. The stars mean so much. Sending along my very best.
Sal XOs

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

The plot thickens as Elling doesn't intend to stay in custody, and Candace and Simon are determined to be married. But you left me wondering why Betty Jo has a wedding dress she never wore.

 Comment Written 15-May-2023

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reply by the author on 18-May-2023

Carol dear, Thank you for the excellent review and insightful comments. Both are so appreciated. Sending along my very best.
Sal XOs

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

I'm so glad everything is working out. Did Patience have something to do with the lightning strike at the hospital? Fee has a plan, I'm sure, and she isn't going to let him get away with it. With Tommy's help, of course.

 Comment Written 15-May-2023

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reply by the author on 18-May-2023

Thank you for the excellent review and insightful comments, Cindy. Both mean so much. Sending along my very best.
Sal XOs