Comment from patricia dillon

Excellent

I thought this was very imaginative. I felt so sorry for all the animals you described. That poor elephant without a trunk! Anyway you drew a very good moral.

 Comment Written 12-May-2023

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reply by the author on 12-May-2023

Thanks, I don't understand why I received only one vote, last out of five.

reply by patricia dillon on 12-May-2023

Yes, you definitely deserved more.

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

That's a good children's story, Darla. Kids need to hear stories like that. Maybe you have a knack for stories for young people. Is that a real picture?

 Comment Written 11-May-2023

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reply by the author on 11-May-2023

Yes it is real.

reply by the author on 13-May-2023

Please review my war story.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Such a sweet tale, perfect for children as well as adults. The moral is a strong one in need of resonating in our world today in which diversity often becomes a meaningless catchphrase. Well done and good luck in the contest. Debbie

 Comment Written 09-May-2023

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reply by the author on 09-May-2023

Thanks, Debbie

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

An inclusive piece of prose. There is a good moral underlying your story. Congratulations on being able to communicate this. A pleasant and enjoyable read

 Comment Written 09-May-2023

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reply by the author on 09-May-2023

Thanks!