Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Again, thank you for the sharing this story with us. It's a great reminder that death is an important part of life and this circle of life we live in.

Death are you now done with my only son Jay? (comma after 'son')

 Comment Written 09-May-2023

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reply by the author on 09-May-2023

I also caught the spag at the end also.
Thanks Barbara for reviewing!
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Reading this placed my mind to the moment I lost a son, then my wife three months later. I understand this write but to the writer, I found solace in surrendering everything to Jesus. Now I have peace. Thank you, and the Lord bless you.

 Comment Written 08-May-2023

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reply by the author on 08-May-2023

My condolaces and sorry to hear.
We are in an Extremely rare club.
To be a member?
You need to lose the Son and the wife.
Welcome Ben Colder.
Grieve with Writing..
Doctor Ricky1024'

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Death is the worst part, hands down in life. Not your own...as you have so tragically learned.

When I meet the Grim Reaper, well let's just say I'd like to spit some Beechnut in that dude's eye .
You are a sword forged in fire, my friend. Use your powers for good.

 Comment Written 08-May-2023

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reply by the author on 08-May-2023

Why thank you Douglas for thr review and wonderful comments.
Doctor Ricky