When I Hear the Anthem Play
A tribute to all those who died for our freedom24 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
A wonderful poem for Remembrance Day and you have entered very well into the thoughts and heart of a child. This is what many would have experienced. Unfortunately. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wrndy
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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A wonderful poem for Remembrance Day and you have entered very well into the thoughts and heart of a child. This is what many would have experienced. Unfortunately. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wrndy
Comment Written 10-May-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful review and your kind wishes.
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your dedication to the men and women of the army and military. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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I have enjoyed reading your dedication to the men and women of the army and military. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 09-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Thank you very much. I'm happy you enjoyed it.
Comment from royowen
Unfortunately not all wars are fought for the sake of freedom. I think generally speaking it's been to gain dominion over others, being British born and seeing Europe consumed by a power hungry villain, that would have been scary, fortunately we had good allies. This is beautifully written in heptametric stanzas and aabb rhyming, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Unfortunately not all wars are fought for the sake of freedom. I think generally speaking it's been to gain dominion over others, being British born and seeing Europe consumed by a power hungry villain, that would have been scary, fortunately we had good allies. This is beautifully written in heptametric stanzas and aabb rhyming, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful comments, Roy. They are much appreciated.
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Well done
Comment from jmdg1954
I never had the privilege to serve, so all my wishes go out to those who have and my prayers go out to those who perished protecting our freedom and democracy.
Your poem is well penned with meaningful words and phrases.
God bless to all military men, women and families.
John
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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I never had the privilege to serve, so all my wishes go out to those who have and my prayers go out to those who perished protecting our freedom and democracy.
Your poem is well penned with meaningful words and phrases.
God bless to all military men, women and families.
John
Comment Written 09-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your wonderful sentiments, John, and for your 6-star review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful poem entry for the Memorial Day In Poetry contest.
Great commemoration for or soldiers who made the ultimate sacrifice. Your perception words made me cry.
I love the imagery and presentation.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Wonderful poem entry for the Memorial Day In Poetry contest.
Great commemoration for or soldiers who made the ultimate sacrifice. Your perception words made me cry.
I love the imagery and presentation.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 09-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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I thank you very much for your kind words, Gypsy.
Comment from karenina
What is not to admire about your poem? I'm happy it is not autobiographical and devastated that it is biographical for far too many...
Memorial Day is not all about picnics and hot dogs and the first trip to the shore. It's about our ability to do all of these things freely--
May we all take the time to remember the many who have given everything for us.
Congratulations on a most meaningful poem!
Karenina
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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What is not to admire about your poem? I'm happy it is not autobiographical and devastated that it is biographical for far too many...
Memorial Day is not all about picnics and hot dogs and the first trip to the shore. It's about our ability to do all of these things freely--
May we all take the time to remember the many who have given everything for us.
Congratulations on a most meaningful poem!
Karenina
Comment Written 09-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Thank you very much, Karenina, for your thoughtful review.
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Bless our Veterans!
Comment from Regina Elliott
Dear poet, This is an eloquent
and heartfelt poem on our
brave military. To sign their
life on the line takes an
extraordinary amount of
courage. My very best wishes
for the contest. All the best.
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Dear poet, This is an eloquent
and heartfelt poem on our
brave military. To sign their
life on the line takes an
extraordinary amount of
courage. My very best wishes
for the contest. All the best.
Comment Written 09-May-2023
reply by the author on 09-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Regina, and for creating this contest too.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
First I want to say that I am glad it is not autobiographical. Secondly, it is a beautifully written poem. You honor our active military and veterans with your verse.
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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First I want to say that I am glad it is not autobiographical. Secondly, it is a beautifully written poem. You honor our active military and veterans with your verse.
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your very nice review, Ginda.
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
A poignant poem for Memorial Day. I'm glad that you did not experience this loss. But an exceptional job of getting inside the head of one who did. Rhyming was unforced and the meter held up. Good work.
-Chuck
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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A poignant poem for Memorial Day. I'm glad that you did not experience this loss. But an exceptional job of getting inside the head of one who did. Rhyming was unforced and the meter held up. Good work.
-Chuck
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you very much, Chuck, for your wonderful review.
Comment from nomi338
I joined in a time of peace and did not stop to consider the possible demands that my service might make on me. I was fortunate to be honorably discharged just before Vietnam exploded. Please believe me when I say, all of us, especially those of us who did not have to serve there, owe a debt of gratitude that will more than likely never be paid in full.
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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I joined in a time of peace and did not stop to consider the possible demands that my service might make on me. I was fortunate to be honorably discharged just before Vietnam exploded. Please believe me when I say, all of us, especially those of us who did not have to serve there, owe a debt of gratitude that will more than likely never be paid in full.
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you for sharing your experience. I'm glad you didn't have to see combat, but I still thank you for your service.