Lessons Learned and Spiritual
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Judgment Day"Do good and feel good poems
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Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautifully written piece of poetry dear anonymous,! The message is filled with hope. For every human being.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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This is a beautifully written piece of poetry dear anonymous,! The message is filled with hope. For every human being.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Rebekka, I thank you so much for you awesome review of my poem, the six stars that you honor me with, and your very kind words for Judgment Day. You can't possibly know how much it means to me. Thanks again dear friend.
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My pleasure entirely dear friend <3
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very good Bible acrostic. There is one major problem. The correct spelling is "judgment". That is a key line in your poem, so you should do a little editing.
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Very good Bible acrostic. There is one major problem. The correct spelling is "judgment". That is a key line in your poem, so you should do a little editing.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Bless you my friend, Bless you!!!! This is what happens when you had something in mind, have to fulfill it and then have to leave home and forced to pull an all night'';kk, a;; neigh, a;l; nightdress, .... I rest my case. LOL
Seriously tho, thanks so much my friend.
Comment from Sally Law
Super wow, mystery poet! Yes, we must be ready to meet the Lord for His coming is soon. The signs are all around us! Beautifully penned and illustrated in acrostic poetry and biblically themed. It makes me want to stand up and shout Hallelujah-! Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :)) xoxo
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Super wow, mystery poet! Yes, we must be ready to meet the Lord for His coming is soon. The signs are all around us! Beautifully penned and illustrated in acrostic poetry and biblically themed. It makes me want to stand up and shout Hallelujah-! Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :)) xoxo
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Awe, thank you so much Sally. You are so sweet and I don't have the words to tell you how much I appreciate your awesome review and kind words, plus the lovely six stars. Thank you again sweet friend.
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Most welcome! The booth is open and I just voted for you, mystery poet. These contests are coming as fast as Judgment Day! Best wishes!
Sal :))
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-You did a good job with the acrostic.
-I like the font choice emphasizing the first letter.
-A good topic, effective imagery, and rhyme.
-The first part explains "Eternal love" and
the ending section is a very good prayer.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-You did a good job with the acrostic.
-I like the font choice emphasizing the first letter.
-A good topic, effective imagery, and rhyme.
-The first part explains "Eternal love" and
the ending section is a very good prayer.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Hi Pam, I thank you with all my heart for this lovely review and kind words for my Bible Acrostic poem.
You are so sweet and I appreciate you so very much, my dear friend.
(Any chance you'd care to share your birthday w me?)
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You are very welcome, Debi, and I appreciate you and your kindness very much. I will share with you a little later.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi,
This is a well done acrostic on Judgement Day. It goes over the particulars and give you a map on how to get the your final home and who you will meet there.
I like the smooth meter and unforce rhyme. I like how the second stanza is monorhyme and recaps the first one.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Hi,
This is a well done acrostic on Judgement Day. It goes over the particulars and give you a map on how to get the your final home and who you will meet there.
I like the smooth meter and unforce rhyme. I like how the second stanza is monorhyme and recaps the first one.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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You are so kind and sweet my friend. And I do appreciate such thoughtful words and the kind review. I am always honored by both of them. I appreciate you more than you could possibly know.' Thank you again dear friend
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You're most kindly welcome, Debi.
Joan
Comment from Ginda Simpson
You have written a successful Bible-based acrostic poem. Your words serve to remind us that there will be a judgement day. Let us live accordingly!!!
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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You have written a successful Bible-based acrostic poem. Your words serve to remind us that there will be a judgement day. Let us live accordingly!!!
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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You are so kind and sweet my friend. And I do appreciate such thoughtful words and the kind review. I am always honored by both of them. I appreciate you more than you could possibly know.' Thank you again dear friend
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Creative writing, for sure. I understand the gist, therein, and hope others find the message herein rewarding. I hope as well Kingdom comes; why else have we our memories?
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Creative writing, for sure. I understand the gist, therein, and hope others find the message herein rewarding. I hope as well Kingdom comes; why else have we our memories?
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Hi Tom, I thank you with all my heart for this lovely review and kind words for my Bible Acrostic poem.
You are so sweet and I appreciate you so very much, my dear friend.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
A nice poem with a clear and concise message. A message of hope attendants the end. Well done! You have a nice and appropriate picture to match. Take this and the talent with which this was written creates magic.
Having said that I find no grammatical issues with your poem and it's aesthetically pleasing. I'm gonna find a submission to the contact best of luck and have a great evening!
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reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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A nice poem with a clear and concise message. A message of hope attendants the end. Well done! You have a nice and appropriate picture to match. Take this and the talent with which this was written creates magic.
Having said that I find no grammatical issues with your poem and it's aesthetically pleasing. I'm gonna find a submission to the contact best of luck and have a great evening!
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Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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You are so kind and sweet my friend. And I do appreciate such thoughtful words and the kind review. I am always honored by both of them. I appreciate you more than you could possibly know.' Thank you again dear friend
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Anytime
Comment from l.raven
I often think about what Heaven will
be like...but it really doesn't matter...
as long as God is there...I know it will be perfect...
I'm not perfect...but I stay as close to God/Jesus
as I can...and have a strong belief in Him...
I know Heaven will be amazing...
I love your poem...and love your stunning picture...
very nicely written...God Bless...and Good Luck in
the contest...Love Linda xxoo
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reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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I often think about what Heaven will
be like...but it really doesn't matter...
as long as God is there...I know it will be perfect...
I'm not perfect...but I stay as close to God/Jesus
as I can...and have a strong belief in Him...
I know Heaven will be amazing...
I love your poem...and love your stunning picture...
very nicely written...God Bless...and Good Luck in
the contest...Love Linda xxoo
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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You are so kind and sweet my friend. And I do appreciate such thoughtful words and the kind review. I am always honored by both of them. I appreciate you more than you could possibly know.' Thank you again dear friend
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you beautiful girl are sooooo
very welcome....and Thank you for
all your kind words...I am honored
to have a friend like you...goodnight...and sweet dreams...love you...xxoo
