Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

Very nice and well done acrostic poem and a fine example of the same. I find your poem also to be sweet and sincere and with a message that all should know, hear and enjoy. Nice word choice and sentence structure that creates some magic within your poem.
I would suggest a picture or an illustration to go with your Palm. This will catch the eye of the committee and perhaps rank your phone's higher on the scale. Tom is written with I wish you best of luck and have a great evening!!

 Comment Written 07-May-2023

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reply by the author on 07-May-2023

thanks I will think of something appropriate

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

This is a profound acrostic poem. I always compliment word artists who can develop an acrostic that not only makes sense by carries an intense message. Well done.

 Comment Written 07-May-2023

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reply by the author on 07-May-2023

thanks as always

reply by Liz O'Neill on 07-May-2023

Good job ...as always

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

There is always a reaction to action and this is why everything is connected in life, not quite sure what his line means: (Everything is Jake)? I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-May-2023

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reply by the author on 07-May-2023

it means everything is fine.