Passion For Poetry
Viewing comments for Prologue "The Sense"Book 3 of assorted poems
10 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nicely done acrostic for the word spiritual. You have presented it beautifully, and it reads smoothly. I wish you the very best in the acrostic contest. Patricia.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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This is a very nicely done acrostic for the word spiritual. You have presented it beautifully, and it reads smoothly. I wish you the very best in the acrostic contest. Patricia.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much, Patricia for your kind review its very much appreciated. I hope your day is the best!
Comment from royowen
Beautifully and skilfully written Lea. As I view your work, I become more and more blessed by your skill, presentation, language power, and imaginative quality, a wonderful acrostic, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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Beautifully and skilfully written Lea. As I view your work, I become more and more blessed by your skill, presentation, language power, and imaginative quality, a wonderful acrostic, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review. And for your attention, I very much appreciate it and glad that you liked this!
I hope you have an amazing evening!
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Most welcome
Comment from Eleri
This is an intriguing poem that covers the idea of 'spiritual' well. I think, however, that you should have not had any end rhymes as the one at the end seems odd giving that the other lines do not rhyme. Also, and this is a personal thing, I hate the use of numbers in poem, ie why not just write out 'sixth' rather than use '6th'. Having said all of that you have some interesting and beautiful images in here so well done and good luck in the contest.
Eleri
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This is an intriguing poem that covers the idea of 'spiritual' well. I think, however, that you should have not had any end rhymes as the one at the end seems odd giving that the other lines do not rhyme. Also, and this is a personal thing, I hate the use of numbers in poem, ie why not just write out 'sixth' rather than use '6th'. Having said all of that you have some interesting and beautiful images in here so well done and good luck in the contest.
Eleri
Comment Written 03-Jul-2023
Comment from lancellot
This is very good and it does have that spiritual tone. Good luck in the contest.
notes:
Reverberates the stage my mind talks in turns one thing one time
- Recommend looking at this line again. It doesn't have the internal rhyme as the others.
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This is very good and it does have that spiritual tone. Good luck in the contest.
notes:
Reverberates the stage my mind talks in turns one thing one time
- Recommend looking at this line again. It doesn't have the internal rhyme as the others.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2023
Comment from JSD
Just love your style. Stuff 'the' and 'a' unless absolutely necessary. Let the words carry their own force. Great stuff which rewards careful and repeated readings. Excellent use of unforced and natural rhyme. It all just fits so well. Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Just love your style. Stuff 'the' and 'a' unless absolutely necessary. Let the words carry their own force. Great stuff which rewards careful and repeated readings. Excellent use of unforced and natural rhyme. It all just fits so well. Well done!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
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Thank you and that's a good tip too. Actually you know. I tend to cut out words like that I feel if the Flow is not right but I should do so as a general rule good tip thank you! Your reviews are awesome by the way!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This acrostic honors the spirits of trees and the speaker's sense of spiritual things as well. I liked reading it. Favorite line: Inside my soul knowledge springs
Interesting use of 'chalk full of plans'
I am not sure if you meant 'chock full of plans' there. But since chalk usually means writing or drawing to me, it could go either way.
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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This acrostic honors the spirits of trees and the speaker's sense of spiritual things as well. I liked reading it. Favorite line: Inside my soul knowledge springs
Interesting use of 'chalk full of plans'
I am not sure if you meant 'chock full of plans' there. But since chalk usually means writing or drawing to me, it could go either way.
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your kind review and I actually didn't think about the chart full. I think I use the wrong chalk l o l thank you so much for pointing that out. I appreciate your review and all your kind comments and your time as well. I hope you're having a great day and hope the sunshine where you are!
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very nice acrostic, Lea. I am a firm believer in the spirit world. I used to be a skeptic, but events later in life made me see the light. "... bell rings at three". I was a teacher for ten years.
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Very nice acrostic, Lea. I am a firm believer in the spirit world. I used to be a skeptic, but events later in life made me see the light. "... bell rings at three". I was a teacher for ten years.
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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I thank you so much for your review and for your kind comments. The incident where actually my heart was stopped for a minute and 9 seconds. I don't remember being gone but I remember what happened the moment I opened my eyes and everyday since. I hope you have a wonderful day!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine acrostic to pay tribute to all trees as they depict life at its best and tower over us like guardians on earth, I enjoyed your musings Lea, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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A fine acrostic to pay tribute to all trees as they depict life at its best and tower over us like guardians on earth, I enjoyed your musings Lea, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Thank you so much Dolly I really appreciate that you like it thank you For your review as always I'm grateful! Hope you are doing well!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Well done with your 'Spiritual ' Acrostic poem Lea. I enjoyed the thoughtfulness in this write and in particular
Inside my soul knowledge springs....
Some never feel or seek beyond what they see, but not you. Good luck in the contest, cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Well done with your 'Spiritual ' Acrostic poem Lea. I enjoyed the thoughtfulness in this write and in particular
Inside my soul knowledge springs....
Some never feel or seek beyond what they see, but not you. Good luck in the contest, cheers
Valda
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you Valda! that's so kind of you say. Your insight is spot on. I appreciate your kind and thorough review as well it's always nice to see you there and thank you again. hope you have a great night!
Comment from ScrappyBabe
Very interesting poem. I enjoyed your wording and the flow. I read this poem a few times and each time got more from it. I really enjoyed it. It made me think. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Very interesting poem. I enjoyed your wording and the flow. I read this poem a few times and each time got more from it. I really enjoyed it. It made me think. Well done.
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you! A flash in the pan. a moment in the life of my brain l o l.I suppose you could call it. thank you so much for your time for your kind review. I'm really glad you enjoyed it I hope you have a really great day)!